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Reviews For Sibling Rivalry
Reviewer: JRParz (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 31

Glad Bella and Alice patched things up - for their friendship is probably one of the most crucial elements in any Twilight universe based tale... and talk about cliffhangers!  :-)

Unfortunately, the Cullens never told Bella about the treaty they have with the Quielettes.  Given Bella's eye color - maybe that was a major mistake, huh?  Hmmm...



Author's Response:

Exactly. None of the Denali's know about the treaty. This was a big mistake on the Cullens part. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Miliejolie (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 12:46 PM · On: Chapter 31

Nice chappie



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Rebeca (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 31

Aaaaaaaahhhhhh cliffhanger! Please please please please please dont take that long to write the next cahpter i dont think i can wait that long! this one was great please update soon xXx



Author's Response:

I'll do my best! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: kony1994 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 8

Wow! I love this story so far!!! I hope Bella and Edward get closer soon!!!!!!

Reviewer: Illyra (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 31

Ha! But I will attack you for tht cliffie! ;)
Please update soon, I can´t wait for the next one. Excellent chapter! Love all those emotional moments.



Author's Response:

Wait! *hides behind Jasper* Now try and attack me! Lol thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: k4str (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 31

Oh no! We all know what those wolves can do to newborns! Yikes. ;)



Author's Response:

Remember Bella was trained by Jasper!

Reviewer: msclark2008 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 31

Please Bella dont kill the wolf. I'm nervous



Author's Response:

Don't worry! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 7

OOO I SEE THE TITLE COMIN TO FRUITION SOON!

Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 6

LOVE THE MOUNTING TENSION HERE!

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 31

im nervous for bella, she won't be able to completely get away from that wolf unharmed. will tanya be able to help her? will she be ok? what about the wolf? who is it?



Author's Response:

The Bella and wolf fight will be a tough one. The other questions will be answered in the next chapter. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Ma Cherie ya habebi (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 04:50 AM · On: Chapter 31

great plot twist. i do not want beklla and edward to leave the cullens



Author's Response:

Thanks so much. Hopefully you won't be too upset with the outcome...

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 30

Great chapter. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 04:08 AM · On: Chapter 31

AWESOME CHAPTER!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 03:18 AM · On: Chapter 29

Great chapter. Glad Tanya's found her mate and she's no longer bothered by Edward/Bella. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: kay0913 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 02:58 AM · On: Chapter 31

Oh no. Somehow I think the next part will be pivotal.



Author's Response:

Yes, it will be!

Reviewer: ROSEjen (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 02:52 AM · On: Chapter 31

HOW COULD YOU.. MAYBE IT IS JAKE OR SAM, HAHA, OR MAYBE THAT GUY TANYA IS WITH TURNED INTO ONE.. HURRY UP AND UPDATE SO I KNOW..



Author's Response:

Sorry! We'll find out who our wolf in the next chapter!

Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 02:31 AM · On: Chapter 31

WOW!  I still hate the thought of them moving to Russia and it irritates me to no end but I guess I can't control that.  My thoughts are that they are NOT going to be happy there no matter what Alice says!

Good cliffy!



Author's Response:

Lol thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: mmmhotdogs (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 31

Oh wow I LOVE this story keep more chapters coming!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Jadiona (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 31

Dang it (a few other choice words are said aloud) are you trying to kill me? I swear you only have the capability of writing cliffies. You're going to kill me with all these stupic cliffies. scratch that, you already did

http://ihasahotdog.files.wordpress.com/2009/03/cute-puppy-pictures-play-dead.jpg

 

See I'm dead.



Author's Response:

I apologized to you beforehand in the Chapter End notes!! Please don't die! I'm not trying to kill you at all! I want you to be addicted to this story!

BTW

cutest pic ever!

Reviewer: Delicious Dreamer (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 31

oh no! i hate cliff hangers so much!



Author's Response:

Sorry!

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 28

Great chapter. Who will Bella and Edward decide to live with? Glad Bella forgave Jasper. Who has Tanya just run off with? Can't wait to read more, I've gotten so behind in my reading :(

Reviewer: sheynondoah (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 31

That's not good.  

 

Great chapter!  I'm glad that Alice and Bella seem to be working things out.

Shey



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: TLRichard05 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 31

Thanks for the update. I hope everything is ok with u. I've been thinking about ya and hope it all gets better!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Things are slowly working themselves out. I'm going to keep positive!

Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 31

WTF!  i so the whole time im waiting for Bella and Edward to change their mind and stay because of how his family is feeling and then i get a Cliffy with Bella attacking a werewolve! well done, now im anxious to see what happens.



Author's Response:

Lol I'm glad I can still shock some people! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 31

Nice cliffy



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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