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Reviews For Sibling Rivalry
Reviewer: katydid (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 7

Damn, let's see how this turns out...Of course, Bella has heard much about Edward, but what does she feel?

 

Thanks for the update-Kate



Author's Response:

That, my dear, is a very good question! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: gabby871 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 7

please tell me that bella had the same feelings when she meet edward. i hope tanya isn't going to hate them. i'm sure she would be jealous but hopefully won't stand in the way of true love. i'm curious what was going through here mind when she met the cullen's. i wonder if we're going to be seeing a bella obsessed james and pyscho victoria in your story. please update soon.



Author's Response:

There will NOT be any James and Victoria in this story! I can't wait to see what everyone thinks about Bella's reaction in the next chapter! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 7

"My hand swallowed her tiny one and I gasped yet again as a million volts of electric desire ignited in my palm and up my arm. I wanted her...."Edward," she said nodding her head respectfully at me."

Well, this is gonna be sticky......Bella is not going to want to hurt Tanya, but you know she will feel just like Edward does....

I'm thinking that the only way that Edward and Bella to be together is for Edward to tell Tanya, in no uncertain terms, that it has been 50 years and he likes her for a friend, but it will never be more...He can let her down gently.  



Author's Response:

Interesting...let's see what happens!

Reviewer: carolinabelle (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 7

Uh Oh. Now this is getting good.

Love the story, can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 7

yay! An update so quick!! I love it!!



Author's Response:

Thanks. There will be many very quick updates!

Reviewer: jabellz (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 7

Edward's reaction was even better than I anticipated! Can't wait to read more!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!!

Reviewer: sdnez (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 7

I got it!! A Midsummer Night's Dream

Author's Response:

Lol we shall seeeee!

Reviewer: Nano Annis (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 7

Ack - I'm hooked and I can't wait for more!  I see fireworks ahead!  Loved her reaction to Jasper BTW; I really love the guy! :-)



Author's Response:

I love Jasper too! After Edward he was my fave! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: gabby871 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 6

i can't wait for the cullen's to show up. i hope edward pov will be included in your story.



Author's Response:

We will definitely have Edward's POV

Reviewer: BookAddict (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 06:39 AM · On: Chapter 6

I definitely would NOT say you've been making an ass of yourself!  Many people writing fanfic have less-than-stellar spelling and/or grammar, and sometimes it detracts from the readability of the story.  In your case, I would say that it doesn't! 

As an English teacher, I say "work on it", but as a reader, I say "awesome fic, keep up the stellar plotline!"

 



Author's Response:

Oh thanks so much!

Reviewer: Larifari (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 6

Nice story.

I hope, I can read your next chapter soon.

Can't wait to see the first meeting of Edward and Bella and Tanya's reaction to it.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: cullens_pet (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 02:42 AM · On: Chapter 6

ooohh... The Cullen's are coming. I can't wait. Good chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: mothlights (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 6

Nice -- from burgundy, to poppy red, to flaming orange, and now finally gold

Also nice -- 

"Vampires are beautiful, there's no denying that. We know it and the humans know it," she began in a tone that was low and seductive. "Our beauty is generic in a way. Greater than what humans can hope for but still common, it's not entirely special," she said.  -- "Now humans on the other hand have a beauty that is precious, like diamonds. They are so much different from us. Their beauty is in their vitality, in the way that they change and transform before our very eyes," she breathed. "Look at him," she said nodding to a passing man.

Thanks. 2 weeks...



Author's Response:

Thanks! I had fun writing the descriptions of humans!

Reviewer: mothlights (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 5

I wondered about Carmen and Eleazar, but they are such small parts in the books, that not having them around doesn't bother me. 

Nice to see Bella not get hurt by the electricity. 

Looking forward to E's arrival - no surprise.

Particularly liked --

Blood gushed into my mouth and the taste consumed me. I moaned in a way that would have embarrassed me if I was not so wrapped up in the pleasure of the taste. I pressed my face further into it's neck. If I let one drop go to waste it would be the biggest mistake of my life. I had to have all of it. It relieved the scorching heat from my throat and I couldn't drink fast enough.

(Minor typo - I think you're missing a word in "Are you this is supposed to hurt?" I asked.)

Thanks for posting



Author's Response:

Good to know, about Carmen and Eleazar. So many asked about them and I was really worried it was so going to be a big problem that I didn't include them. E's coming in the next chapter! Again sorry for the typos.

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 6

OMG!!!!! I can't wait for the fireworks when Bella and Edward meet....and Tanya gets JEALOUS!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: jabellz (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 1

I love this plot!!  I can't wait to read about Edward and Bella's meeting!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Next chapter already written and waiting for validation!

Reviewer: msbf84 (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2010 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 6

Finally the Cullens are making an appearence!
I hope things don't go sour between Bella and Tanya.

BTW I love the description of human beauty. Is so real...

Thank you for updating!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I'm really liked the human description, I was really anxious to what people would think about it!

Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 6

yay cullens!! can't wait to see how tanya reacts to this!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: fotogirl (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 6

I don't think Tanya's going to be too happy with the Cullen visit, but Bella and Edward on the otherhand....

I love this plot!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 6

Awesome! Hope Edward is in the next chapter!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: cullenstyle (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 6

Cullens!! YAY!!!

I hope she doesn't do anything with anyone... Edward is the one. This is ExB?

Irina's story was sad! No Laurent here?

Update soon, and give us The Cullens, please!

 



Author's Response:

I have said before that I will neither confirm nor deny that this is a ExB story.  I'm not sure about Laurent, yet. Next chapter will up soon.

Reviewer: vampireyouth (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 2

I'm loving his story. I passed it up a few times because there were so few chapters. Now I'm glad I'm reading it.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: iggy2109 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 6

another great chapter thanks can't wait for the cullens - your spelling has definately improved as well as your grammer



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 6

I love this story so much. Please tell me you will keep Bella innocent for Edward! I will give you extra points. I can't wait until the Cullens arrive. Again, love the story.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! As for Bella's innocence...we shall seeee!

Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 6

Love this story!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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