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Reviews For Sibling Rivalry
Reviewer: alecjanes (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 11

nooooooo!!!!!! more please it was good



Author's Response:

lol thanks!

Reviewer: alecjanes (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 10

wooh go bella

Reviewer: Illyra (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 11

That was funny. I love jealous Edward. Can´t wait for the next one.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Next xhapter waiting to be validated!

Reviewer: cullens_pet (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 11

I love, love, love this story. Very refreshing. I can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Delicious Dreamer (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 11

that was a good chapter. it was funny and light and just what i needed at the moment. and also, i cannot see the banners either. until next time, fruits and ice cream to the writer...



Author's Response:

Thanks! I love fruits and ice cream!

Reviewer: veggiegirl0601 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 11

I'm really liking your story!  Can't wait to read more!  



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 11

decensy my friend, theres an anaconda constantly beside you E



Author's Response:

LOL!

Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 11

I can't stop laughing! I love that Bella beat Edward in a sprint and then gloated!

Love Edward staring at Bella when she came out of the water... The sexual tension was definitely there. Are you going to write any lemons? Hope so, I think you could do amazing things with citrus-action!

Edward is jealous of Jasper!!! Love that! What did Jasper say to Bella? Will you answer that in the next chapter?

Your story has quickly become the highlight of my day!



Author's Response:

My story is the highlight of yor day? You've made me so happy! There will be lemons don't worry. Yes, we'll learn what Jasper said in the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Colum (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 11

Ohhh Edward is really brooding, great stuff with Emmett and the bears..loving the story!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 11

That was Awesome!! I loved that Bella totally kicked Edward's ass at running and she would have had that bear to if not for the bear being unpredictable. Sigh...if Edward only knew why Bella stay away. I do hope Tanya sees soon and understands that Edward wants Bella not her. Geesh trying to do the right thing can be hard. I feel bad that Bella had to gag down that fish...ewwww

Unfortunatly I can't see the banners but can't wait to see what they look like. Will keep an eye out for them



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I'm working to try and correct the problem with the banners!

Reviewer: Nano Annis (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 11

Another great chapter - love competitive Bella - ugh, eating a raw fish though, yuck!  She has betrayed herself just a little here, so it'll be interesting to see how E approaches her - she has to let her guard down just a little bit sometime, but he really needs to handle Tanya first.

 

I can't see the banners, but my internet connection can be a bit weird like that, so I'll try again with the next update and let you know! x



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. No one can see the banners so it's probably not your computer.

Reviewer: 23aether (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 11

Great job!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: 23aether (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 10

I like Bella's distractions.

Reviewer: 23aether (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 9

;)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: 23aether (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 7

Well we have E's POV what did Bella think?



Author's Response:

In the next chapter!

Reviewer: ludo (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 11

I loved this chapter! You write Edward's POV of Bella in action so well.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: amhatfie (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 11

This was awesome. Too bad Bella could not beat them both. I feel bad for her since Tanya is her sister. I can't even imagine how she is going to react when she finds out about them. I know they haven't done anything but it has to only be a matter of time.

Oh, I can't see the banners.

Alaina



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: 23aether (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 2

I'm a huge fan of children's lit.  This is has an interesting twist to it.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 11

That was a lot of fun!!

Edward's really going through the wringer in his head... with Bella's shield in-play, I wonder if Jasper's actually caught any of the emotions flying around?

 



Author's Response:

Poor Edward...Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Bellina (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 11

eewww... she ate raw fish.  gross!  Story is getting better and better so is the writing. and thank you for the rapid updates!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: mrs_nethercutt (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 11

nope i cant see the banners. but keep up the good work im lovin this story.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: rosita (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 11

luckily killing the polar bears is fiction,if not I would be really, really sad/angry, but the chapter was good, i liked the interaction between B/E and I was a  sad for Tanya.



Author's Response:

I would never encourage actual killing of polar bears. And Tanya definitely didn't deserve to be yelled at. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 11

i've been skimming chapters because i was interested in your setup from the beginning. but i read all of this one, definitely the best chapter yet. don't like the idea that tanya had her hands on edward at all but at least he didn't sleep with her. now no matter how long the fighting lasts, i will be happy when bella gets to hear edward's side of the tanya story, his past, and why he tried to talk himself into something more with her



Author's Response:

Thanks! That conversation won't be for a while though.

Reviewer: distinctly_forbidden (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 11

Kid you not, you're updating fast enough. ;) Oh and I cannot see the banners



Author's Response:

lol Thanks!

Reviewer: SillySarahAnnn (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 11

It's so close, I can almost taste it! I cant wait for when they both snap.

I read what others have been saying about wanting longer chapters and let me just say, as long as you keep them coming as often as you have been the lenght of the chapters matters little to me.

And no, I cannot see your banners.

Waiting breathlessly for your next chapter,

Sarah.

 

 



Author's Response:

The snap won't be pretty at all, I'll warn you now. Thanks for reviewing!

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