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Reviewer: ForeverATwilighter (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2012 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 1

Read the next part of this story and i loved it =D

i must say i really loved this as well! very very nice concept and i am a sucker for stories about soulmates <3 very very nicely done =)

Reviewer: Nana25 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2012 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 1

REALLY? THATS IT? I FEEL LIKE I WASTED MY TIME NO OFFENSE 

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2011 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 1

Heart wrenching with each version of Bella actually seeing Edward and losing him from sight in some ways.  Feeling that immense pull towards him only to lose him in death at first and then to lose him from him walking around a corner, flying on an plane away from him, having him drive away, etc... Each putting that Bella version into a pit of despair not wanting to continue without him.  Each died soon after the parting due to an accident of some sort.  Very sorrowful and sad with the history of their misencounters.  Looking forward to reading Tangled Webs.  Sorry haven't reviewed earlier having computers problems up/down.

Reviewer: romeosjuliet14 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2011 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 1

wow this was good!

Reviewer: TiramiSue (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2011 01:25 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oh my God!!! That was sooo good!!! Seriously, I can't wait to read TW!!! If it's anything like this prequel promises it to be....bravo!!!!

Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2011 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 1

This was amazing, i can't say enough about it. But i do have a question did bella's looks change through out the years or did she always look the same? To me i think she changed because wouldn't the others remember her then right? lol
Again this was amazing and i very much enjoyed reading.
Your an amazing author and i can't wait to read more from you.
well until next time
mbellaandedwardm

Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 1

Unique and interesting start. Can't wait to read the full story!

Reviewer: JD Thorn (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 1

The first thing I want to say is that I really appreciate the effort you put into the names of these characters. I noticed that All the dads names started with 'C', the Moms with 'R', all the last names with 'Sw"  and the daughters all had 'Bel' in them somehow. And not just those, but all the names in the story. I thought that was extremely creative. I know how hard it is to name characters, especially so many of them. It must have taken a good deal of thought on your part. I really hope others noticed that too. I also liked the back stories of each girl and how she always misses her man by a fraction of an inch, and knows something is wrong in the pit of her stomach, but fate has a way of stepping in. She keeps getting closer and closer though. I think they keep missing each other not just it is not the right time for them yet, but because she always dies. Am I wrong?

I also loved how she always seems to run into Carlisle in her lifetimes(for the first few anyway). Since it is the same Carlisle (even if it is not the same Bella), I wonder if he recognizes her, or rather the essence of her. I wonder if Edward would if he got to run into her each lifetime. I get the feeling he would have.

I have only read the prologue from Tangled Web, but I really can’t wait to get reading that one now. I really loved this extra long 1-shot, and I’m really glad it was so lengthy too. It needed to be to let us understand how long these two have been meant for each other before they connected.

…And now for Tangled Web… Reading on…

Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2010 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 1

An interesting concept of Bella reborn - am off to read the other story as I found this intruiging.

Achilles

Reviewer: pennylynn (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow.  Really good.  I can't wait to read the longer one from Edward's perspective.

Reviewer: Jacobblackishot (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 1

wow.  thats all i can say is wow.  that was fantastic!  it totally flowed just right.  i loved it and TW as well

Reviewer: she-rah (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 1

Awesome!  Very moving as well.  Loved how she smelled him in the room in 1934 after he had left!  Sad too, of course, but destiny prevailed!  Great job!  Looking forward to your next project.  :-)

Reviewer: amg98 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 1

I loved Tangled Web and this was a great companion piece.  I enjoyed how you had Bella go through the years almost meeting Edward.  Thanks for sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks for following along and letting me know, I really appreciate your taking the time!

Reviewer: Sunshine72 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 1

I enjoyed it.



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