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Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Break Out

Glad Edward came clean with what was bothering him. Anthony is just too adorable. Rosalie and Emmett need to work their shit out.

Reviewer: breaking dawn 84 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Break Out

que susto!!!!!!ya pense que edward la dejaba

haber ahora que pasa quando se vayan de vacaciones de navidad

edward ha cambiado mucho

Reviewer: kayphere (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Break Out

Poor E... I wish he could be all fixed and better... Love these two together though.  Thanks for updating!

Reviewer: Bluecanoe (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Break Out

You know, I've known my husband since I was 15 years old, so we certainly didn't just meet.  We've been married for 43 years and *cough*, he STILL asks me things exactly the way Edward just brought that up, even the body language beforehand.

I'm NOT a scary person, honestly!!  Are you sure this Edward is a Gemini? ' Cause he acts like a fricken Capricorn!

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Break Out

Great chapter!

I'm glad that Edward let her in and talked to her. Plus, I'm glad that she's going with him...although, I knew she would.

Looking forward to your next update!

Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Leave Me Alone

This is a great story. Loved it!

Reviewer: ldybug1701 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Leave Me Alone

Obviously, Edward still needs some therapy.  Although, it seems a BJ has some pretty powerful effects.  What a flip.  I love how he goes from want her to leave to begging her to stay.  Edward really is coming a far way. 

Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 04:11 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Leave Me Alone

woohoo an update !

This story really makes me think....

great writing again...Im sure Anthony already 'knows' about dad and Bella,

till next time

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Leave Me Alone

Can't wait for the reveal!

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Leave Me Alone

Oh Edward :( I get why you're overreacting about Leisel because of your background, but jeez louise are you prone to a tanty. *L* Luckily Bella seems to understand you, your need for a little space and has no problem taking care of your son while you get your head together.

 

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Leave Me Alone

he is still just a sad little boy

Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Leave Me Alone

I just love the progression of their relationship and how you make it so realistic.

Great chapter!

Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Leave Me Alone

Love your story and this chapter.

Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Leave Me Alone

It's awesome to see Bella be there for Edward and for him to let her. Their day could have gone wrong many different times but they're learning how to handle each other. That's why this is such a great story--it's true to life. Not that I don't love stories that aren't, but it's nice to read about a couple that actually has to work at their relationship.

Reviewer: Tabitha Finch (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Leave Me Alone

Really, instead of Teacherella, she should be called St. Bella, for she is endlessly patient with the recalcitrant Edward.  The guy is still so wounded by his childhood -- and rightfully so -- HE is the one who really needs a shrink!

Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: breaking dawn 84 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Leave Me Alone

bella sabe siempre como ayudar a edward porque hay que admitir que el es un poco cabezon.tenia muchas ganas de leer este cap esperro que tu escribas pronto otro

Reviewer: kal0797 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Leave Me Alone

Another great chapter in one of my favorite stories!!

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Leave Me Alone

:) Yay, progress!

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Leave Me Alone

hmm Edward's had some internal revelations... not quite epiphanies I think, but getting there. Bella's ... strategy?.. was very interesting ;) It certainly got Edward's attention heh

I'm glad to see that Edward was able to work through his temper though until it started to make some kind of "sense" to him.

I wonder at what point he'll face some therapy of his own?

Reviewer: mrscullen (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Leave Me Alone

Really great chapter. You went in a different directions a few times that I wasn't expecting. Please update soon!!

Reviewer: Rebecca Rage (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Leave Me Alone

great story!can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Ma Cherie ya habebi (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Leave Me Alone

Thanks for the update. I really love this story. I know Edward is surly but I find hism inspirational. His endurance, strength, and innocense are so alluring in this story. thank you

Reviewer: WrittenInTheStars (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 21 - It's the End of the World As We Know It

Oh god this story is simply awesome! I feel as if I'm actually in the story together with the characters !!! Great job ;D

Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Leave Me Alone

Great chapter!  I'm not nearly as good with words as you, but I wanted to tell you I really, really enjoy your stories.

Reviewer: sheynondoah (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Leave Me Alone

Amazing chapter!

 

Maybe it was just because it was Edward's POV but I didn't really like that therapist.

 

Shey

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