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Reviewer: BLOOdPROMiSE (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2011 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 36 - Our House

my. favorite. story. hands down. jussayinn'

Reviewer: AlysLuv (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2011 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Our House

great  update!

Reviewer: Shazarabbit (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2011 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 36 - Our House

Aww amazing!I'm curious though, does this mean we will get a possible reconciliation between Carlisle and Edward soon? In time for the wedding? If you do happen to make Bella/Edward have another child. Please don't call her Renesmee XD. Update soon. xo

 

Oh and the title reminded me of the song: "OUR HOUSE, IN THE MIDDLE OF THE STREET, OUR HOUSE."

Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2011 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 36 - Our House

Great chapter :)

Reviewer: Starnani21 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Our House

I find it really funny that it took so long for Edward and Bella to have that wonderful talk about possible children. Shouldn't it have been at the forefront of Bella's mind since she first began things with Edward?

It's my personal belief that 'things happen,' therefore, once you enter into a sexual relationship with someone the possibility of children should be discussed ASAP. It's not so much a matter of planning to have children, but preparing for the chance of pregnancy and what it might mean to/for each other.

Kids are just too big a deal. They alter your whole life. And, some people have such strong feelings regarding abortion and other family planning issues, that it's just best to be on the same page before the shit hits the fan.

I know from the very beginning that I didn't/don't want to have children. However, my fiance (an only child to a single mother) wants to have a handful. We've been together for a long time now... and, we are still trying to settle on a compromise. And, I think it's important that I love him enough to even consider compromising on the idea of creating another human being.

What makes a good mother? Hmm? I think that would be a whole other essay for me to write. But, Bella has already proven herself to be a good mother in her wonderful, attentive, and loving care of Anthony in this story.

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 36 - Our House

The more secure Edward gets in his relationship with  Bella the more he is able to let himself feel something for his mother. They all need to stop overthinking, loved the way Anthony solved some of their problems so easily.

Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Break Out

I'm still reading.  I'm sorry I haven't reviewed after every chapter, but I get caught up in what's going on.  I have to say, the woman (Bella) has the patience of an effing saint sometimes.  I love this story.

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Our House

Hi

I hope one day it will be has simple for Edward to renite with his parents. It was a aweful accident that took his sister and to lose his parents at the samet time and think that they did not want him.  hopfully there is a happy ending for them at they can be friends.    and it was so sweet and adorable that Anthony just like that asked Bella to be his mom.    Your story is very heart wrenching.  So much pain and the happiness and loving that is forming is awesome.  Have a great weekend Smiles Leona

Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Our House

:)

Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 35 - Don't You (Forget About Me)

:)

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 35 - Don't You (Forget About Me)

That was sad and happy.  I think I'm having a hard time not to cry..  very emotional for Edward and his family.. 

Aweaome.  Have a great weekend Smiles Leona

Reviewer: westosobear (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Our House

Wonderful chapter.  Loved the "born mom" and the "married mom".

Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 21 - It's the End of the World As We Know It

God, I think I'm going to die...

Reviewer: Ma Cherie ya habebi (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 36 - Our House

I recently reread this story and I have to say that out of all the fan fiction I have read (which is alot more than I should admit too) this story is definatly in my top five. It is well written, heart felt, interesting, and sticks with you long after you walk away from the computer.  Thank you.

Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 10 - With or Without You

i have a feeling this is gonna be bad...

Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 7 - If You Leave

Can't see to type through the tears...poor Gus. 

Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 2 9 to 5

Oh, it's gonna hit the fan now.

Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Father Figure

Hey, that'll warm you heart right there..."I hate you."  I get why, the kid's scared to death.  Moving to the next chapter.

Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 36 - Our House

Awww! That was so sweet! Anthony is just so amazing! And he seems to bring out the best in everyone! I'm so glad the videos are working for Carlisle. I wonder how far he will recover.

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 36 - Our House

Awwwwww

Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Don't You (Forget About Me)

Absolutely absorbing!

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Our House

The end was adorable.

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 35 - Don't You (Forget About Me)

Poor Anthony :(

Reviewer: EdwardxJacob (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Our House

AWWWWWWWWW
that's all I can really say. The entire chapter was AWWWWWW lol.
Can't wait for the next!

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Our House

Excellent chapter!

I'm glad that the 'mom' issue is worked out between Bella and Anthony.

I think that Edward and his family will reconnect. It'll just take some time.

I'm looking forward to your next update!

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