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Reviewer: reebisgirl (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 04:00 PM · On: Instinct
More please.... I'm in love with this story!!!
Author's Response: THank you so much. The next chapter is coming.
Reviewer: IssaBissa (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 07:46 AM · On: Instinct
interesting chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 05:52 PM · On: Instinct
Edward's going to remember! Yay! We'll find out what the heck happened to him and who did this! Great tale!! Loved the Edward and Bella pieces. :)
Author's Response: Yes, Edward is going to share what he can remember about what happened. Thanks so much for the reviews.
Reviewer: alliz (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 11:48 AM · On: Instinct
OMG, i am hooked to this story! Wonderful, I dont have any other words! Another chapter soon, please?!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm working on another chapter now. Hopefully, it'll be ready by this weekend or the beginning of next week.
Reviewer: laurieglory (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 05:51 PM · On: Instinct
What? This story is not complete? AHHHHH I can't wait to see what's going to happen!
Author's Response: looool Sorry... :) I hate to disappoint you. It is still a work in progress...
Reviewer: starla_1979 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 03:28 PM · On: Instinct
Thank you for responding! If you every do decide to go to FF.net here is my profile:
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2167351/starla1979
I'm not a writer but I do enjoy quality stories and those in my profile are my top picks. I hope some of them interest you. I'll include you under the heading "Favorite story not on FF.net" the next time I update my profile :-).
Author's Response: I just signed myself up at FF.net and submitted the first few chapters of this story. Thanks for the suggestion. My penname is Mei Li Young, but the story has the same title "A Brave New World."
I'll check out some of the stories that you are recommending. :)
Reviewer: starla_1979 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 02:03 PM · On: The Fight
Hi there! I found your story through the Edge Girls blog and I'm hooked! I usually read stories on FF.net and it had been awhile since I came back to this site. Have you considered posting over there? Even if you don't you are still on my alerts. Great premise. I am sure Bella is feeling a bit rejected right now but their interactions are so spot on. You are doing a great job sticking to cannon. Lots of luck with the rest of your story. I will be eagarly awaiting your updates.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. I don't know much about FF.net I really only got hooked on fanfiction when I found this website. I'll take a look and see what I think. I'm really trying to stick to cannon in the personality of the characters. I'm so happy that you noticed.
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 11:32 PM · On: Instinct
intresting ! cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm working on the next chapter now!
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 03:45 PM · On: Instinct
oh edward, i just want to be happy!!
Author's Response: :) Thanks for the review
Reviewer: liljules (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 02:13 PM · On: Instinct
Great work! This is so intriguing!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I'm glad that people are liking it.
Reviewer: dhArma (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 08:15 PM · On: Instinct
oh emmett he just had to ruin everything lol
Author's Response: lool Yeah, I agree!!
Reviewer: txgrl (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 08:07 PM · On: The Fight
Your story got me hooked right away so I had to read all the chapters. Very good premise. I am looking forward to seeing where you take this. Thanks so much!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 06:11 PM · On: Instinct
I loved it! Your Edward is so complex, just like canon Edward.
Author's Response: I'm trying to be true to canon in the personality of the characters while taking the story in a strange new direction. Thanks for noticing! :)
Reviewer: AngelByEve (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 05:56 PM · On: Instinct
Good chapter, most enjoyable. It was refreshing reading the B/E daytime interactions. I'm eager to read more. As always, I encourage you to keep moving forward with it.
-Kristin
Author's Response: Thanks a lot. I have the story all mapped out, so I'll try to speed up production. :) Thanks for the encouragement.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 02:53 PM · On: Instinct
This was SO amazing. I loe that Edward is battling with his "vamp" instincts and not understanding the basis for having them. He is confused and out of place. It is so Edward that he feels like he is taking advantage of Bella. Jasper had some good words of insight to offer him. Hopefully he will remember more of his past. I am so intoxicated by this story!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm glad that you all are enjoying it. I'm really enjoying writing it. I am really going to try to update more quickly. Stick with me!
Reviewer: galaxy69uk (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 02:08 PM · On: Instinct
ohhhh Edwards been turned into a werewolf!! Thats why Alice can't see him, and thats why Jake thinks he smells familier!
Fab story the first chapter was brutal and made my chest hurt!
Author's Response: The first chapter was really hard to write, so I guess I did a good job if I made your chest hurt. ;)
You'll have to stay tuned to find out more about what happened to Edward.
Thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: Gogsnkay (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 01:50 PM · On: Instinct
You'd better be serious about those rapid updates because I love this story and that chapter was amazingly good! We're getting places. :) Loving it. Keep up the great work. X
Author's Response: looool I'm really trying. I have another one in the works right now. I'm taking my lap top with me to Montreal, so I should be able to get more written. I'm going to spend my days wandering from coffee shop to coffee shop.
Reviewer: TwilightMelissa (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 10:56 AM · On: Instinct
im so happy, Edward and Bella finally kissed! <3
Author's Response: Me too! :)
Reviewer: robert cullen (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 10:23 AM · On: Instinct
Hmmmmmmm...... What could this possibly lead up to? Wasn't Oscar the real werewolf that Paul hung out with?
Author's Response: Yes, Paul left the pack to go off with Oscar.
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 10:21 AM · On: Instinct
I enjoyed watching Edward get to know his family, Bella and Jacob and share some of his past with them. I loved Jacob's honesty in their discussion earlier when asked about their friendship. It was nice that his family and Jacob gave Edward and Bella the day to themselves in the sun, so they could get closer. I was surprised how quickly that kiss with Bella escalated before Emmett interrupted them and Edward's shame took over. Jasper was the right person to send over to calm him down and explain that his reaction to Bella was normal and not that of a monster.
Author's Response: I wanted this chapter to show that the connection between Edward and Bella is still there and very strong. There is alot under the surface that is not just about a young couple falling in love. Edward is not just a normal human. There are two sides to him-- the part of him that is a human man and the part that is a supernatural being. These two sides are still battling inside him. I want his relationships to his friends and family to be different after all that has happened to them. That is why I chose Jacob and Jasper for him to trust.
Thanks for the great review!!!
Reviewer: rowltyde (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 10:10 AM · On: Instinct
I loved this chapter... only thing I saw was "Astrology"... Astronomy is the study of the star and outer space... astrology is the "fortune teller" study.
Author's Response: Crap! I knew that... I'm going to go back and change it now. It'll drive me crazy if I don't. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 07:33 AM · On: Instinct
Woo Hoo! Edward's letting loose & gettin' a little freaky w/ Bella!
I am anxious to find out what exactly happened to Edward & hope there will be answers soon?
Author's Response: "Getting freaky" I love it. :)
Yeah, the next chapter is coming and there are some answers in it. I'm holidays, so I should have one ready soon.
Reviewer: nurseryteacher (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 07:24 AM · On: Instinct
So happy to get the email alert for the update (and happy that there's another on the way).
Love the chapter, love the story! Sue x
Author's Response: Thank you for being such an awesome reviewer. I know that I'm taking a whille to write these chapters. Hopefully, with this holiday I'll be able to get a couple of chapters ahead, so I don't leave you guys alone for such a long time.
Reviewer: nocturnal_rendevous (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 07:11 AM · On: Instinct
Bow chicka wow wow, Edward! That was a nice change from the norm. Loved the chapter and I'm glad there's a semblance of memory there. What's with the pain in his arm? Is whatever that vamp did to him starting to...wear off? If it does, will he get his memory back? All I can do is sit back and wait...and hope. Update soon, I can't wait!
Author's Response: Thank you. Yeah, I thought it was about time that Bella and Edward had some fun. I'm working on the chapter now. So, I'm going to try really hard to have it ready for next week.
Reviewer: fangrl (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 06:44 AM · On: Instinct
Good chapter. Like that Edward's relationships are starting to form. Glad that he and Bella are getting close. I especially like that he and Jacob are friends.
Author's Response: I really like the relationship between Jake and Edward too. I always liked Jake and didn't like that people were an either or fan.
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