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Reviewer: Missypooh (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 02:39 AM · On: Wait...WHAT?!
Dear lord...you have me so anxious I think I need a drink after this. Please, please update soon. Your plot line is so original and I have no idea where this is going and am loivng every minute of this story.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. YOu guys are all great.
Reviewer: nocturnal_rendevous (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 08:35 PM · On: Wait...WHAT?!
Ah, ha! Was he somehow sent back in time or something, or his soul re-born or something because he died for Bella's safety? Or, is it another vampire's power to manipulate Alice's visions so as to facilitate the continued inprisonment of Edward? I'm rather intreagued!! Please, don't keep me waiting too long!
Author's Response: Thanks. The next chapter should be up this week!
Reviewer: pamirvine85 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 08:02 PM · On: Wait...WHAT?!
oh my god you didn't.... your killing me
Author's Response: Ha ha... I love your reaction...
Reviewer: JanCullen86 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 08:01 PM · On: The Fight
Aww, poor Bella! I got a little teary eyed there for a moment.
I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 08:01 PM · On: Wait...WHAT?!
wait what??? exactly... what i want to know.. lol
Author's Response: I know. I thought the title was appropriate ;)
Reviewer: TiffanyCullen (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 08:00 PM · On: Wait...WHAT?!
wow maybe he is there in Florida looking for Bella
Author's Response: Nope... he he he
Reviewer: Strider (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 07:47 PM · On: Wait...WHAT?!
Hmmm...very interesting cliff hanger there! I can't wait to see what Alice sees next!
Reviewer: pamirvine85 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 02:06 PM · On: Life Before Death
that was great.. haven't read anything about edwards change.. very nicely done
Reviewer: AbIeMzXxX (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 09:38 AM · On: Life Before Death
Pleasee continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: TiffanyCullen (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 03:20 AM · On: Life Before Death
wow that was great
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 06:41 PM · On: And It All Came Crashing Down
Alice! This is getting SO good!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 06:34 PM · On: The Fight
I know it just can't be Edward, but it's still so sad to contemplate.
Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 03:23 PM · On: Life Before Death
I'm not sure what this has to do with the rest of the story, but I liked it!
Author's Response: It'll become clearer soon. There is a mehtod to my madness.
Reviewer: Missypooh (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 01:16 PM · On: Life Before Death
You have me on the edge of my seat...please update soon
Author's Response: Thanks a lot. The next chapter will be up soon.
Reviewer: Missypooh (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 01:01 PM · On: Life After Forks
Oh my...you have me nearly in tears. I'm loving this story.
Reviewer: michiganmama (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 10:13 AM · On: Life Before Death
I really like this story. Hope it is updated often.
Reviewer: nocturnal_rendevous (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 09:39 AM · On: Life Before Death
Very good rendition on what happened to Edward and his family during the outbreak! I commend you, it was very well written. You definitly have a gift. Keep it up, I am eager to read more!
Reviewer: nurseryteacher (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 08:53 AM · On: The Fight
Just read the first four chapters and am intrigued - looking forward to the next update!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. The next chapter will be up soon.
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 08:23 AM · On: Life Before Death
This was a lovely chapter, very well-written!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot. I really had fun writing it.
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 08:09 AM · On: Life Before Death
I don't think I've ever read about Edward's change! That was interesting. Now we find out what Alice is going to tell Bella? It was nice to have a little history of Edward's beginnings. :)
Author's Response: Yes, the next chapter is back to Alice and Bella. It should be posted soon. I'm just fine tuning it.
Reviewer: Strider (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 04:22 AM · On: Life Before Death
Good chapter! I don't mind waiting to see how it's all connected, since I'm sure it will all come together in the end. Good research on the Spanish flu, too--I actually double checked some of your symptoms, because they sounded more like the Plague to me than the flu, but you were exactly right on that. Those horrific symptoms were part of what made this disease so horrifying and scary. The scene with the little boy was terrible and poignant, and really drove home how this epidemic affected the lives of real people.
Author's Response: I was a history and English literature student in my undergrad, so I became really obsessed with doing research for this chapter. I was surprised that it was so similar to the plague as well. I think it was because a proper sanitation system was not put in place until really the end of that particular wave of Spanish influenza. Some of the rumors that Edward's father described were actual stories that I found from historical texts. I know that I sound like a real nerd right now...
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 02:59 PM · On: And It All Came Crashing Down
So I take it Bella lost it to Aiden? I guess I don't mind since Aiden is truly a nice character. :) I can't wait to see what Alice has to say next chapter!!
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 02:52 PM · On: Life After Forks
Oh boy... if Edward isn't dead, he waited until Bella fell in love with someone else before he decides to come back? Timing is everything! *g* His must be a little off. I like your characters! They seem to love Bella and care about her a great deal. Nice story!
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 02:36 PM · On: The Fight
That was really sad! Death is so final, it's no wonder Bella refused to believe Edward was gone. Poor girl! Great beginning!!
Reviewer: nocturnal_rendevous (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 05:14 PM · On: And It All Came Crashing Down
Awww...what the hell?! I was hoping to hear more! Well, you've got me hooked, I hope you're happy. LOL Well, I can't wait for the next chapter, I really, really want to know what's up with Edward. I'm assuming that this vacation that they are going to go on is where she will see Edward again, huh? Hurry up and update! Don't keep me waiting!
Author's Response: Thanks for the response. I knew that my cliff hanger would drive some of you crazy, but I have to keep you hooked. :) The next chapter will be up soon. Thanks again for reviewing.
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