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Reviewer: babbling_brooke (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 07:12 PM · On: Ruse
I have to keep reminding myself that he deserves it, otherwise I think Bella is being a Bittah Beyotch..........
I do like that they are both playing each other, but this will end ugly I think....
I can't wait for EPOV, he is less vindictive and more if a cocky whore...
Reviewer: Secret Rose (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 01:48 PM · On: Ruse
omg! update soon! i need to what happens nexttttt
Reviewer: Secret Rose (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 01:46 PM · On: Daze
edward is already whipped and he has no idea.
Reviewer: Secret Rose (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 01:44 PM · On: Lure
hehe edward is clueless! love it! cant wait to see his reaction
Reviewer: Secret Rose (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 01:41 PM · On: Temptation
Really enjoying this. =)
Reviewer: Secret Rose (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 01:39 PM · On: Genesis
This is awesome, clicking next.
Reviewer: HayleyLoux (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 07:49 AM · On: Ruse
eeeee im so happy ive finally found a story i like again, all my faves have been finishing and im in love with your story.
as much as i lvoe her idea i am a bit like alice, i want them too fall in love love loooveee :) im a hopeless romantic.
your a fab writer, looking forawrd to the next chapterr
Author's Response: That's weird, all my faves are finishing up, too. There are some great new stories coming around. I've been beta-ing a few of them, and it's really exciting to start fresh with a story.
Thank you so much for the compliment, and am glad you'll continue to read. :-)
Reviewer: megsten (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 09:28 AM · On: Genesis
Thank you thank you thank you. I've been looking for a fic this imaginative for a while. I am loving it and I can't wait to see where it goes. So glad I found this!
Author's Response: I'm happy you're enjoying this as it'll get more heated with every chapter. So, I hope you stick around. :-)
Reviewer: clancy (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 03:53 PM · On: Ruse
so the girls know who they are but the idiots still have no clue - right ??
with every chapter i fall more and more in love with the game : )
Author's Response: Yeah, the idiots have no idea, haha. It's more fun like that. ;-)
And the game is going to pick up even more. It'll be entertaining to watch.
Reviewer: Sandra (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 09:23 AM · On: Ruse
Oh, it's not just phase one that will be a lot of fun ;)
Schemeward will get hit by a truck and won't even know what hit him :D
Author's Response: lol! That would be great if he literally got hit by a track. Maybe I'll add that to Phase 5...ahaha. End of story.
Reviewer: iDrinkBloodshake (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 12:03 AM · On: Ruse
Would it be weird if I'm curious about what Charlie would think if he knows that his own daughter has become like Edward, perhaps worse? LOL
Or does Charlie have no clue about it?
I agree with Bella, though. Phase 1 is going to be so much fun. ;)
Em
Author's Response: Ha! Charlie has NO clue whatsoever. He dislikes Edward and thinks his daughter is an angel. Just like Jasper does. :-)
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 08:31 PM · On: Ruse
Bella is such a deceitful bitch...and I love it! lol
Author's Response: lol! Yes, and she's actually going to get worse. *shakes head in disapproval*
Reviewer: mrsckugs (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 04:47 PM · On: Temptation
Schemeward is kinda hot. He is the type of guy I looked for when i was doing the club thing.
Author's Response: I agree that Schemeward is hot, but he's also sleezy! :-)
Reviewer: sospecial21 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 02:51 PM · On: Ruse
Has always, excellent story, keep it coming. I cant wait to see the heat!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And heat is soon. ;-)
Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 01:24 PM · On: Ruse
I LOOVE IT ! update soon, please
Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 12:35 PM · On: Lure
just a little mistake in this chapter, hadnt bella left her panties at mmike's ?
Author's Response: lol, someone else brought this up, too, and I'll tell you what I told them: Bella has a spare panty drawer in her office. There's a whole lapse of time between when she leaves Mike's place, to when she meets Edward. ;-)
Reviewer: gabys (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 12:12 PM · On: Ruse
Loved the chapter, keeps getting better and better.
Reviewer: BellaCarolina (Anonymous) · Date: March 19, 2010 10:39 AM · On: Ruse
"Maybe I could run back over and check on things periodically?" Alice asked, as we walked across the street to Satyr, making sure to check for moving cars.
Like a mother and her baby, so funny!
So why would B not know Em was Ed's brother? What happened there? Hmm... he go to military school/ was in juvie/ grad before Bella went to the school?
So, what has got the bro's so distracted? I wouldn't put drugs off the table, they do have a lot of buisiness for people who offer the same thing as BAR's club! Maybe they are offering something extra. Wouldn't put it past them.
I can't wait for this story to unfold, the phases make it even better!
Bella <3
Author's Response: Haha, yeah Alice is like the voice of reason. She'll definitely be more mature than everyone else.
Emmett is quite significantly older than Edward. When B and E started high school, he was at college. So, Bella never met him.
lol, they're offering a bit more than BAR's club. They have a much more euro-dance feel to their club as opposed to the girls with a more sophisticated, trendy club. People like to dance, I guess!
The phases will help us all keep track, which is why it's good. :-)
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 08:26 AM · On: Ruse
:)
Reviewer: sprazinko (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 08:17 AM · On: Ruse
this is really good cant wait to read more
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 07:22 AM · On: Ruse
Fantastic chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Hope you continue to read. :-)
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 05:09 AM · On: Ruse
OMG, crush him Bells!
Author's Response: lol. I love your commentary, Rose. :-)
Reviewer: justjenn (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 04:37 AM · On: Ruse
Great chapter, Dani! I love cruel Bella! It's refreshing not to see our favorite characters in the same, typical roles...
Can't wait for the next installment!
Author's Response: I agree. I hate typical roles. I've tried my hardest not to have stereotypes in all of my stories.
Glad you're continuing to read! :-)
Reviewer: michangelina (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 04:04 AM · On: Ruse
love it.. awesome.. please keep going..
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! I will definitely keep going. Hope you keep reading!
Reviewer: Carson1 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 03:51 AM · On: Ruse
Loved this chapter! OH, I can't wait for Phase One...Cheers, Les
Author's Response: We're in phase one! It should wrap up soon and onto the next. :-)
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