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Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 06:28 PM · On: Blur
Like the blast from the past moment. At least we get some more insight into why Bella's running her game on Edward. No dick is worth that pain!
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 06:26 PM · On: Blur
Alot was reveiled in this chapter. I can see a slight change in Edward and how he's treating Bella. I'm not gonna go and flip switch on Edward right now. There's always two sides to a story. Great chapter, I'm a little worried about Jasper though. I don't want to see him get hurt. ;)
Author's Response: lol, poor Jasper. He's so damn clueless in this. He's sorta the "other" guy without knowing it. And I don't expect you to like Edward, in fact, I expect you to hate him. I've actually been quite surprised that some people are saying they like Schemeward. I understand he's entertaining, but he really doesn't treat women with respect. Not saying Bella is any better, because she's probably worse if you really look at it. :-)
Reviewer: lynnjay79 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 06:05 PM · On: Blur
I'm always surprised by the twists and turns in this story. I should know to expect the unexpected by now. Would love a EPOV on the high school bathroom scene. Im hoping when its appropriate for the story we'll get that. Can't wait for more! update soon please.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad to know this story is unpredictable. I set out to make it as unconventional as possible, so I'm happy it's working. As far as an EPOV goes for the bathroom scene, there may not be one in the story itself, but maybe I'll make it an outtake at a later point. That scene is too important to not at least get his opinions on the matter, which will be told later on.
Reviewer: Lion loves lamb (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 05:38 PM · On: Blur
oh hurry with the next chapter. I think something must have happened for Edward to behave this way. A girl did this to him perhaps?
Reviewer: sospecial21 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 05:19 PM · On: Blur
I think Bella is wrong to judge Edward for thep erson he was in high school. He was younger and immature then. He didnt know anything, so i do feel bad for him. They are starting to care about each other and poor jasper. he doesnt deserve this. Bella needs to come clean with him and tell him what she is plotting.
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 05:08 PM · On: Blur
great chapter.
Reviewer: allycat38654 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 04:52 PM · On: Blur
wow. edward was really quite the ass in highschool. huh?
Reviewer: BellaLovesEdward729 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 09:44 AM · On: Opaque
i dont know if i feel sorry for him to be honest! i wonder if he would have went through with it if she didn't show up! hmmm...
Reviewer: BellaLovesEdward729 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 09:04 AM · On: Ego
who's at the door?!?!
Reviewer: BellaLovesEdward729 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 08:35 AM · On: Shadow
haha everytime he says bella stork i laugh! lol
Reviewer: BellaLovesEdward729 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 08:18 AM · On: Duplicity
diapers?!?!?! ahh!
Reviewer: BellaLovesEdward729 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 07:03 AM · On: Rampant
schemeward seems more like dumbward. lol that was stupid but i had to say it lol
Reviewer: BellaLovesEdward729 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 06:45 AM · On: Ruse
hmmm, things are getting interesting:)
Reviewer: BellaLovesEdward729 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 06:18 AM · On: Daze
yes the KIT girls make me want to vomit! but im loving edward going nuts over bella, hmm i'll wonder if he'll remember, and i wonder why he rejected her then! we'll see!
Reviewer: BellaLovesEdward729 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 05:56 AM · On: Lure
oh!!! not a nice pplace to end it!!! Lol
Reviewer: BellaLovesEdward729 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 05:30 AM · On: Temptation
hmmm!!! will he remember?? i wonder! hehe
Reviewer: BellaLovesEdward729 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 05:07 AM · On: Genesis
i fell asleep last night before getting a chance to read this! so im reading this now! awesome first chapter! love it :)
Reviewer: KEEGANN (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 07:17 PM · On: Opaque
I can not wait for Edward to find out that Bella owns the club.
Make it good.
Great update and looking forward to the next
Reviewer: michangelina (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 03:43 AM · On: Opaque
i DON'T KNOW IF I FEEL SORRY FOR HIM.. I MEAN HE IS A PLAYER, AND I HOPE THAT BELLA GETS THE REVENGE SHE WANTS.. BUT I CAN'T HELP BUT WANT THEM TOGETHER.. ANYWAY GREAT FUCKING CHAPTER.. PLEASE CONTINUE AS SOON AS YOU CAN.. THANKS..
Reviewer: indiecynic (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 01:21 AM · On: Opaque
this is such a great story!guess bella saw the whole thing.. edward refusing and all...
what else is there to say other than.... great job! can't wait for more!! srsly
Reviewer: ZEE_21 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 07:51 PM · On: Opaque
Is this all apart of her plan? Or is she actually starting to feel something for him?
Great chapter!
XOXO
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 05:49 PM · On: Opaque
Hmmm, yeah I think I do feel a little for the guy now. He's starting to really care about her unknowingly. I wonder what was going on in her head when she walked in the office and saw Edward with Gianna. Can't wait to see what happens next, surely he'll know that Bella was the one who tampered with his stuff. Another great chapter, keep it up. ;)
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 05:09 PM · On: Opaque
I have maybe an ounce of sympathy for Schemeward...but I'm sure that's just gas from all the hot air he is blowing :)
Reviewer: whoaacxh37 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 02:06 PM · On: Opaque
not feeling sorry for him, but maybe thinking he should have refused a little quicker than it took for her to unzip those pants. not ruling out feeling sympathetic though(:
Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 12:49 PM · On: Opaque
Ugh! I can't believe you left us hanging like that. I feel sorry for both of them. I think that they need to get it on! LOL! I can't wait to read the next chapter now! I hope it's soon.
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