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Reviewer: BreyonnaMorgan (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 10:14 AM · On: Rampant
She's playing well.
Reviewer: BreyonnaMorgan (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 09:38 AM · On: Ruse
Hell Yeah!!!!!
Reviewer: BreyonnaMorgan (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 08:48 AM · On: Daze
I wonder if Bella knows where her phone is.
Reviewer: BreyonnaMorgan (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 08:48 AM · On: Daze
I wonder if Bella knows where her phone is.
Reviewer: BreyonnaMorgan (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 08:19 AM · On: Lure
Man, what the fuck?
Reviewer: BreyonnaMorgan (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 07:15 AM · On: Temptation
I hope she play his ass good.
Reviewer: BreyonnaMorgan (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 06:36 AM · On: Genesis
Hell Yeah!!!!!
I like this!!!!!!!
Reviewer: luvsux (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 10:21 PM · On: Coax
Man, I hope Bella stays strong enough and sticks with her plan, at least for a while. He's good at what he does, being the player so Bella better stay on her toes. The problem with the club's competition is; they both aren't doing the right things to attract both genders. Maybe if one side smartens up, they'll figure that out in time before they have to close down. Seth is such a little shit but hey, if I were in his shoes I'd be milking it for all I could get also.
Reviewer: Tina02 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 07:10 PM · On: Coax
loved this chapter.
will edward tell bella what he plans to do for his club?
can't wait to read the next chapter.
Reviewer: rosita (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 05:01 PM · On: Coax
Yes you are right Set is a really little shit. It is getting interesting...
I can not wait, hurry...
Reviewer: frackandbonechick (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 02:23 PM · On: Coax
my god this story is good :) I seriously can't wait to read more
Please continue soon
Reviewer: Cassandra Kitten (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 10:28 AM · On: Coax
Seth is indeed a little shit. But he's sooooo cute. Edward really pisses me off. I really hope Bella gets her revenge soon.
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 08:58 AM · On: Coax
oh yeah Seth is a little shit. I think Bella is definately holding the upper hand right now. Can't wait for an update.
Reviewer: ZEE_21 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 08:54 AM · On: Coax
I'd actually like to see more fake Edward-Bella-Jasper love triangle. Those 3 are fairly entertaining! :)
As always, I loved the chapter!
Reviewer: sospecial21 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 04:49 AM · On: Coax
I really hope Edward isnt gonna keep getting all the bad, i think Bella deserves some too lol. Great story as always
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 03:36 AM · On: Coax
Seth is a little shit!
Bella and Edward are so damn blind about themselves!
How can Edward and Emmett not realize yet that Rose, Alice and Bella own the club? They always find them there!
Reviewer: lovinrpattz (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 02:20 AM · On: Genesis
Chapter 1 Review - I always believe a good story can hook you in with its first chapter, and this fic has definately done that for me. I love the whole idea of this story and am really looking forward to see what happens between these characters.
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2010 10:31 PM · On: Coax
Seth is a smart little shit! lol Friggin' Edward is like a chick in a relationship. I'm sure his testicles are shrivelling up and forming ovaries as we speak :)
Reviewer: DirtyAim (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2010 09:29 PM · On: Coax
Seth is a big little shit, there I said it!^_^
Cant wait to see what suprise Edward has instore for Bella. Frankly, I hope she gets a dose of humble pie by the end of this, because she is just as horrible as he is. Its one thing to be a maneater and enjoy sex, its another entirely to purposefully target the emotionally vulnerable just so you can hurt them. Thats despicable.
Reviewer: twiheart89 (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2010 08:39 PM · On: Coax
Hahaha there are no Quebecian's in my country, they are known as "Quebecois" and I think they're here to stay...blame them for 13 years of miserable French classes ugh! Great chapter :)
Reviewer: mayghen12 (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2010 07:55 PM · On: Coax
loved the update!!!! :)
Reviewer: CC Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2010 07:54 PM · On: Coax
I just love this!!! Even your notes put a smile on my face.
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2010 07:37 PM · On: Coax
Since you gave permission...Seth is a little shit! I'm totes wondering WTF happened to Edward to get him to calm down so fast, possibly who ever he was talking to on the phone? Loved this chapter, I can feel the tension rising. Great job. ;)
Reviewer: ZEE_21 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 07:00 PM · On: Ambush
Testosterone Tuesdays!!! What a freakin brilliant idea! LOL! I'm enjoying this story far too much:)
Can't wait til the next chapter... Bella's in trouble that's for sure!
Reviewer: angelsmg (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 02:06 PM · On: Ambush
:)
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