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Reviewer: HayleyLoux (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2010 12:55 AM · On: Crux
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Reviewer: Edward_Loves_Bella_1988 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 01:22 PM · On: Crux
Oh, dear gosh...he knows! About time!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 04:46 PM · On: Crux
Wow! It's about time lol.
Reviewer: ClearFlower (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 12:44 PM · On: Crux
Guessing the whole "I´m fucking dead"-thing is linked to the old arrested thing ..
Reviewer: christi2804 (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 12:39 PM · On: Blur
I love this story! but I noticed when it's time for Bells's POV you always give her the whack onnes and Edward has the good POV!
Reviewer: DecoyDream (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 04:56 PM · On: Crux
Maybe its just me being all clueless but, why is Edward all panic-y about chief Swan being Bella's father?
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 07:20 AM · On: Crux
Holy Crap! Can't wait to see where this goes! I really feel bad for Edward right now, Bella and him just really need to talk and I have a feeling that the Chief had something to do with Edward turning Bella down back in the old days! Bella needs to stop this shit right now!
Reviewer: kmac17 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 04:54 AM · On: Crux
oh I loved it...things are getting so good, please post again very soon please :)
Reviewer: kaghanyou (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2010 06:01 AM · On: Ambush
LOL, a gay Paul. ROFLMAO
Reviewer: kaghanyou (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2010 09:56 AM · On: Ego
Was the mystery person Jasper? who else would have a reason to be there? Oh I know, the pizza dude also delievered to T&G right!?
Reviewer: kaghanyou (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2010 06:31 AM · On: Shadow
You know, I'm a little surprised he didn't get her plate number and run it somehow to learn about her.
Reviewer: kaghanyou (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2010 05:29 AM · On: Duplicity
Jasmine, LOL. I never heard that one...actually I've never heard a girl equivelent to Jasper, brillient. Edward, diapers...did he have an oops or is he just picking them up for a friend. Damn it, now I'm going to have to read the next chapter before I can work on my stories just to satiate my curiousity.
Reviewer: kaghanyou (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2010 06:46 AM · On: Daze
Honestly, I don't like KIT but at least you don't go into detail at all. Hopefully he'll stop using them soon.
Reviewer: kaghanyou (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2010 05:07 AM · On: Genesis
Whoa, Bella is a whore...I don't think i've read a fic where she is, its usually Edward...well, they both are huh. Well its interesting enough that I'm going to chapter 2 so something caught my interest.
Reviewer: luvsux (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2010 06:58 PM · On: Evolve
Touch & Go cannot end up being defeated. I'm hoping that maybe Emmett can work some magic for them w/o hurting his club either.
It's hillarious that Emmett knows Bella's plan with Edward. But, I'm also sure that he's aware of the problems that are facing the girl's club. He doesn't seem to be the type that would allow Rose's and the girls' club to go under.
I know Edward's seemingly changing and may be starting to develope feelings for Bella but I kinda hope she gets to turn the screws on him and he does some suffering of his own. He can't come out of this whole situation unscathed.
Reviewer: BreyonnaMorgan (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2010 06:01 PM · On: Evolve
Damn.
I hope that Bella's plan works and that she doesn't feel bad later.
Reviewer: Shaz (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2010 04:36 AM · On: Evolve
For the first time, I actually wish this story won't have a HEA, because Bella doesn't deserve. Hahah, can you tell how much I dislike her?:P
Reviewer: Shaz (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2010 04:34 AM · On: Evolve
Meh, I really hate Bella. She's such a b***. Sure, Satyr is getting a lot of costumers and Touch&Go isn't and sure, it affects Touch&Go but what owner doesn't want their club to go well? Edward can't not try to get a lot of costumers just because it will affect Bella's club. It's not Edward's fault Touch&Go isn't doing well, if you are in the business you should be creative and improve your club and be PREAPRED for some tough competition. What Bella is doing is completely childish, especially the last part where she said "I'd make sure that he got the brunt of our loss by destroying his heart. I would show no mercy." It's ridiculous and it makes me sooooo angry at her, but it shows that your fic is so good that it makes me feel pissed and write my longest review ever haha ;) I just hope Edward finds out soon and ditches Bella for-ev-er.
Reviewer: ZEE_21 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2010 08:11 PM · On: Evolve
Uh-oh... Bella's out for blood!
Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2010 10:19 AM · On: Tryst
Phew!!! feeling a little flushed after that chapter lol... Glad to see the boys getting along, and what about Bella nearly let the cat out of the bag about owning the club. x
Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2010 08:03 AM · On: Inferno: Part One
I'm guessing the game may be back on for Bella. So pleased Edward didn't follow through with Irina, but what a shock for poor Bella to find her in the closet. x
Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2010 06:02 AM · On: Rage
Great stuff... its all kicking off now... got to read on x
Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2010 03:45 AM · On: Yield
I know Edward has behaved like a total idiot in the past but I can't help starting to feel a little bit sorry for him. He's obviously started to have feelings for Bella, Alice being Alice has picked up on this, maybe she'll talk to Bella. Can't wait to see how this works all out. x
Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2010 03:08 AM · On: Coax
Seth is definitely a little shit, how horrid of him black mailing Bella. Loved the Testosterone Tuesday!! x
Reviewer: RedRoseBlackThorn (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2010 02:05 AM · On: Genesis
Yep. I liked it!
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