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Reviews For Hate Me
Reviewer: MKT78 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2012 06:44 PM · On: Shadow

You had me giggling with the part about Edward buying diapers for Emmett. I am still laughing as I am writing this review. I think Bella is doing a lot better than Edward at playing her game. I wonder when Edward will catch on to who Bella is and what she is doing. Thanks for amusing me with your story!!

Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2012 04:57 PM · On: Axiom: Epilogue

Good story; love the tension with the live/hats thing. Alice was uncharacteristically shy and not fashion obsessed. Really liked the Jasper/Bella BFFs spin, that was something different but worked out really well. A little disappointed with Carlisle and Esme but not totally neccessary for the story. Award for Worst Seth ever although he was pretty funny especially when he ran into the Vanquish. :)

Reviewer: iloverob32 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2012 04:19 PM · On: Axiom: Epilogue

What a fantastic story!  One of the best I have ever read.  The plot was so detailed and so intricate.  Not your average simple fanfic.  Very well-written.  Thanks for writing it!

Reviewer: totallygone425 (Anonymous) · Date: December 08, 2011 06:34 PM · On: Axiom: Epilogue

Great story!!!!!!

Reviewer: abk (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2011 02:37 PM · On: Axiom: Epilogue

what a wonderful story,thanks for the journey ps seth was great.abk

Reviewer: ruthh (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2011 04:20 AM · On: Axiom: Epilogue

i totally loved your story ! Once i started reading it, i couldn stop.

Reviewer: Bevey99 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2011 06:54 AM · On: Pure

I was always Team Edward through the entire story. Even when he was a douche.

Great story. So is MPMI.

Reviewer: Bevey99 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2011 04:29 AM · On: Crux

So he was arrested and his record was wiped clean.  Maybe that has something to do with him rejecting her.  As in Charlie threatened him w/ big jail if he ever came near Bella. ??????  You've woven a fine web.

Reviewer: Bevey99 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2011 05:28 PM · On: Trinity

Funny, all four of you are my favorite fic writers.  I've read everything of Carson1, and trying to catch up on all of yours' and the others.

 

Now I'm confused----- This doesn't make since. The flowers came later when the fight started.

"Those flowers in the vase are mine?" I questioned."Yeah," she replied.I scratched the back of my neck. Earlier, I'd been jealous when I thought they were for Alice, when all along, they were for me."So, then, he came back later…with your flowers…

Reviewer: Bevey99 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2011 02:47 PM · On: Rage

Can't comment, too fucking pissed at both of them.

Reviewer: Bevey99 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2011 09:26 AM · On: Edge

What????????????????????????

Still with you, you're kidding, right?  WHo could stop reading now?

Reviewer: Bevey99 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2011 09:00 AM · On: Yield

Schemeeard turning into Obsessedward.  He's going to remember her soon, and that she was the only girl he ever wanted to be with - the reason he rejected her.

Reviewer: Bevey99 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2011 07:16 AM · On: Coax

Seth is being TOO smart for his breeches, and he's going to be in trouble soon.

Secrets, yeah.

Story is so funny on so many levels.  Really good development.

Reviewer: Bevey99 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2011 04:26 AM · On: Duplicity

This Bella is really sort of a bitch.  It's one thing to fuck over Edward, but to lie to her 'best friend' is not acceptable.  All lies come back to bite you in the ass.

Loving Alice.

Still a good story.

Reviewer: Bevey99 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2011 08:12 AM · On: Daze

Wow Slutward really does dip his dick in too many pies. 

Reviewer: Bevey99 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2011 07:36 AM · On: Temptation

Sweet and sleazy.

Reviewer: dollydimple (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2011 03:08 PM · On: Pure

FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you had me hooked from the first chapter. You also had me in pain laughing, I loved your writing and cant wait to read more of your work. well done. XXX

Reviewer: Shano (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 09:36 PM · On: Axiom: Epilogue

This was a great story. Had a lot of trouble stopping to sleep lol.

Reviewer: mlouison (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2011 04:28 AM · On: Axiom: Epilogue

WOW!!! This was a great story! I really enjoyed reading it! Another author recommended it and I just got around to reading it. Once I started, I could not stop. I spent pretty much all of last night reading it instead of writing about whether or not Aristotle would have approved of waterboarding for my Philosophy class. It was definitely worth it though. I wasn't sure I would like this story because I usually go for the stories that stay in canon but I loved this. I thought it was really interesting that you made Bella and Jasper best friends and Edward and Emmett brothers. In most stories that I've read Bella and Emmett have been close and Edward and Jasper were close. I loved Emmett. I also liked how you showed a different side of Alice. Usually she's the exact opposite. I usually like Seth but I hated him in this story. He annoyed the shit out of me. You did a really great job! Thanks!!!!

Reviewer: j0125 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2011 11:09 AM · On: Genesis

I've read a lot of E&B fanfiction. I find your story well thought out, fun and a really feel good story.

Keep up the good work and keep on writing! I will sure be on a lookout for your other E&B stories.

Reviewer: princesspewo (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 06:00 AM · On: Genesis

never i thought i would see this awesome bella.

Reviewer: princesspewo (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 06:00 AM · On: Genesis

never i thought i would see this awesome bella.

Reviewer: princesspewo (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 05:59 AM · On: Genesis

never i thought i would see this awesome bella.

Reviewer: peeweepixie (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 06:28 PM · On: Pulse

maaaan, she aint even go no where. he panickin' for nuthin (sry i sound so ghetto. i get lyk that when im mad)

Reviewer: peeweepixie (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 07:58 PM · On: Crux

shit, wait? If Edward knows it's Isabella, then why is he going 2 forks? why doesnt he just confront her? im just sayin...aint that a bitch

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