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Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 03:43 AM · On: Chapter 9

ONG! LOL what a way to end the chapter :D im geeked for the next one :D

Reviewer: Nilla (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 03:17 AM · On: Chapter 9

OMG I've been waiting forever for this story to update and then you end the chapter like that. Evil! :P Aww, poor Edward, bet he'll be so embarrassed. I absolutely loved this chapter, and I seriously can't wait for the next one.

Reviewer: desertmama2 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 02:44 AM · On: Chapter 9

I absolutely love the Edward you have created!! I love him! And Bella is so kick ass!! I love what she told Crowley!!! Great story!!

Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 9

Wow, just discovered it, and I love this story! A definite add to my 'favorites'.

Reviewer: laylak (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 01:53 AM · On: Chapter 9

Great update... So happy to hear you are on a roll because I want more =)

Reviewer: TessLouise (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 01:52 AM · On: Chapter 9

They are so sweet!

Reviewer: newecullen1 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 01:51 AM · On: Chapter 9

yay! an update. ur stry gets better with each chapter( not that its ad or anything) lol i know fainting is a serious matter but the image of edward falling out at the sight of blood is quite comical. i commend bella for putting peter in his place. i work in a pharmacy store myself and we get the same type of whackadoodles. cant wait to see the surprise....kudos

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 9

Aww! Poor Edward :( I love this dorky Edward :)

Reviewer: MissMartha (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 01:23 AM · On: Chapter 9

You go girl! I danced around MY living room when I saw the update. I can't wait for the next one

Reviewer: radar33x (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 9

Cant wait for the next part.  This is my fave story!

Reviewer: Avery Grace (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 9

I love this story.   It's one of my favorites and I feel I have pretty amazing taste!

Reviewer: cemyers3 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 12:57 AM · On: Chapter 9

LOVED IT!!!!  Poor Edward......I so want him to get over his awkwardness, but at the same time, it's what I love so much about him!!  Great chapter!!  Can't wait for the next update!!

Reviewer: lfcpam (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 12:53 AM · On: Chapter 9

loved it...loved how edward fainted from the blood and not bella

Reviewer: bookonabeach (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 12:42 AM · On: Chapter 9

On a roll indeed, great chapter. I like how you are moving the relationship forward. Also loving the insecurities and Bella taking charge. Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: jbeaucage (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 9

I'm sorry, I can't leave a review this time--I'm too busy licking my monitor.  Mmmmmm, shy Edward.  Great chapter!!!

Reviewer: ericasmom4ever (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 9

It is so wonderful to see you posting again! I love the premise of your story and the flow is wonderful. And I must confess that I giggle with excitement when I receive an update alert with your name attached!

Reviewer: luvtwilightff (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 9

Beautiful chapter...hopefully Edward will get a little bit more confident now that he has Bellaby his side. 

These two are so hot together...dont know if it is Edward's shyness or what!!  nerds rule!!

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: loyalluv (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 12:10 AM · On: Chapter 9

I'm in love with your Edward!!!! Seriously, I wanted to hurt Mr. Crowley for being such a jerk. Your Edward is definitely my favorite Edward!

I'm so excited for your next chapter :)

Reviewer: vartan22 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 12:06 AM · On: Chapter 9


i cannot begin to tell you how much i squealed when i saw that that this story had been updated.

my heart floods into my chest when i imagine this edward. why why why cant ther be real men this sweet and sensitive in the world

this is the sweetest FF that i have ever read, i love that he is a mess that gets brave every once in a while but for the most part is a wreck.

i cant wait for Emmett to see how he is with Bella

i love that his family is having a hanna barbara moment to see him with a girl

i am even gushing at this

i cant wait for the next chapter- im giddy and after a horrible monday it is greatly appreciated


Reviewer: twimomof4girls (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 11:51 PM · On: Chapter 9

glad Bella could control the Mama Bear and the way she told off Mr. Crowley was inspired!  The make out session between the dumpsters was impressive. 

Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 8

Loved the chapter, I hope that Edward will be OK :( The nerve of some people poo on Mr Crowley :P I cant wait for the next chapter :D

Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 7

WOOHOO  That was F**K HOT in the dressing room:D

Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 02:06 AM · On: Chapter 6

YAY!!! Loved it :D

Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 01:42 AM · On: Chapter 5

SWEET sshe metioned Xena: Warrior Princess!

Love this fic :D

Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 12:38 AM · On: Chapter 4

Loved it :D

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