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Reviewer: dramagurl82 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 14
Very nice... I like your story and can not wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: ilovedwardcullenmost (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 14
GAHHHh they have to find her! update soonnn please!
Reviewer: KLJ1843 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 12
Why, oh why, do you do this to me? My mouth was on the floor the entire chapter. AHHHH
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 14
>O They better get to her soon or else I'm going to pull a RAMBO and KILL SULLY!!
...with...you know...my prose.
He's such an asshole. I can't believe that Edward and Bella are in such danger. URGH! STUPID JAMES!! Why doesn't he have a conscience. URGH!
AMAZING!!!! As always =D I'm addicted to this story and you know, I appreciate a candy coated Cullen every now and then. Who doesn't?
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 14
Argh! A trap! Now how will he get her out safe? Hmmm.. I can't wait to find out.
Reviewer: littlebit (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 14
HOT DAMN!! Update,update!
This is really getting good. :)
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 14
Please update soon? I can't wait to see what happens next!!
Reviewer: TeamAlice (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 13
oh wow! thats brilliant! Same name as Edward... great idea.....
Reviewer: sassy98200 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 13
great story! love it! i am also reading it on ff.net
Reviewer: jordan (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 13
I can't wait to find out what happens next!!! I check every day for an update.
Reviewer: twilightlover1 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 13
Plz continue
Reviewer: rara_avis (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 13
AHHH! Please update sooon! I love this story...it's so exciting!!
thanks!
xoxoxo
Reviewer: aireonna (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 13
*bounces* god this story is going grat, please keep it up
Reviewer: aireonna (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 13
*bounces* god this
Reviewer: frol (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh this story is killing me! I am dying to know what happens next and if Edward can get Sully to kill James, or heck, kill them all himself. Good cliff hanger. It's 4 am and I cannot BELIEVE there isn't any more to read. POST SOON PLEASE???
Reviewer: IHeartJazz (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 13
I found this story last night, and spent most of my day at work reading it ( not a good idea when your a waitress ) so I had to tell you how awesome it is and that I cant wait for more
Reviewer: MrsRobertPattinson (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 13
Oh, I'm so excited that they saved the kid. That makes me happy. It does not, however, make me happy that there aren't any more chapters to read. Update soon!
Reviewer: MrsRobertPattinson (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 12
Ooh, what's going to happen! I must go read the next chapter!
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 13
My favorite chapter so far! I love how the plot is getting more dramatic!
If you get writer's block, I will die for sure.
Please update soon!
Reviewer: MrsRobertPattinson (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 11
Dude, I love it when they pay attention. I mean, rutting in heat has it's moments, but it's really kind of rad when they pay enough attention to the vag to back off and start up again. I gotta go take a cold shower now... :)
Reviewer: MrsRobertPattinson (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 10
Dude, I love it when the boys try to protect the girls. I just sit back and let them do it, too. :) It gets my juices flowing.
Reviewer: Linds14 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 13
Ooooh ...Bella's situation is not looking good, however, I have full faith in Edward to save her! He must!
I'm glad that Edward saved that kid there, well at least didn't kill him..That really shows how he has grown as a person..
Reviewer: MrsRobertPattinson (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 9
Eww, James is gross. I don't necessarily think ill of prostitutes (they are just capitalizing on an industry -- it's the johns that I think are disgusting), but, seriously, screwing a prostitute without protection. He's disgusting. (Don't think I'm calling you out on that, I'm not. It just shows how disgusting he is.)
I'm glad to see my questions about how Edwards was detained being at least partially answered. I don't know why I was obsessed over that, I just was.
I'm also glad that Bella gave our dear Eddie a little comfort ... even if an ice makes did ruin the whole thing. :)
Reviewer: MrsRobertPattinson (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 8
Okay, so, you're gonna have to forgive me. I'm an ass for not reviewing the first seven chapters, but, like I said, you're going to have to forgive me. I was sick yesterday and was barely having a coherent thought. Basically, that means I'm going to go reread them anyway, and I'll review them. From here on out, I will probably review every chapter or I will at least do my best.
As for this chapter, I'd really like to know what James did to keep Edward from showing up at the library. I mean, he shows up later, so obviously Edward didn't get his ass kicked or anything. I'm curious over that little detail, but I'm not entirely sure why.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 13
OMG sniffle this chapter was hard to swallow. Sully actually made my skin crawl and blood to run cold. I couldn't wait to stop reading about him I was glad that it moved to Edward. But then all the killing and everything made me shiver in anxiety why didn't he just call the police for help or someone higher then the police FBI something tell him they could help get the organization down on their knees. ask for amnisty or something!
post again soon before anything happens to Bella. Sully scares me and the longer Bella is inhis sights the more worried and anxius I get!
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