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Reviewer: Ash88 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 15


Reviewer: twilightluver2013 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 15

Where are you?!?! i love this story so much. i miss updates!!! i want to know what happens!!!! please update. :(

Reviewer: freedomunites626 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 15

Well I have to say, this is a really great story.  However you really stink at updating, especially when chapter 16 is supposedly already in the works.  Come on you can't leave us hanging for too much longer.  You got talent now finish this! :-)



Author's Response:

My issue with updating is essentially a sob story so I won't bore anyone with details other then while a chapter may be in the works, real life sometimes interferes.  And it's been doing that a lot and in serious ways lately.  BUT chapter sixteen is finished and in the hands of my beta.  I'm just waiting on her to get it back to me.  Just a little more patience.  :-)

Reviewer: saratopa914 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 15

PLEASE  update!!

Reviewer: Ljchurch21 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 15

OMG!!! I can't wait to see what he does to sully!!!

Reviewer: twilightluver2013 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 15

Where the fuckare you?!?!?!?!?!?! You need to update. This story is too good to be gathering dust!

Reviewer: lifesbliss (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 15

Please update this story!!!!  I can't stand the wait, it is so good. 

I hope this request doesn't make you mad.  I'm just missing it alot!  It's one of my favorites.

Reviewer: absmw1618 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 15

i love this story, great job :)

Reviewer: erae09 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 15

Oh my god! I loved it, you are so clever! This story kept my interest the entire time I read it I couldnt stop! You have to finish it!!

Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 3

And now its on!!! Light the flames!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 2

Now to next club!!!! I LOVE that you wrote about Bella dancing!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 1

That is SO Bella!!!!!!!!!!!!! How can you NOT flirt wit Edward?!!

Reviewer: tiffanypabst (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 15

OMG OMG OMG!! PLEASY UPDATE AGAIN SOON! I love this! I want moree!!!

Reviewer: youdazzleme (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 15

Noooooooooooooo! I just started reading and I am hooked! I know everything will work out in the end (I hope), but the story is just so suspenseful. I hope Sully gets it. 

Hurry Edward!

Reviewer: karentwilighted (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 15

I'm usually much more into forehead kissers than bad boys, but raging, protective Edward is pretty hot. I hope he gets to Bella soon and that doesn't end the story. Need to see them together - that's the good stuff. And I almost feel sorry for Sully - I don't think he's going to like it when Edward gets hold of him fearing after watching the video and fearing Sully may have raped his love. Ouch.

Reviewer: twilightluver2013 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 15

When is Edward going to get Bella back? Please update soon. I cant tell you how much i love this story. I actually look forward to reading it, unlike most fanfiction i read. PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: lifesbliss (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 15

Oh man, I can't stand waiting.  Edward, please to the rescue!!!!

Reviewer: dsccc (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 01:27 AM · On: Chapter 15

Oh my god! Thank you for the AN no  rape! This certainly seems like a possibility! Edward & Emmett are total bad asses and I like it. James is sick and Sully is sicker. I hope James is really as easy as that and is taking them to the house now. The suspense is killing me!! Love it!

Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 11:57 PM · On: Chapter 15

Holy shit...yeah, I can't say anything else

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 15

I hope Edward and Emmett get there in time for Bella.

This story is really good. You have me on edge! Please update soon?

Reviewer: tiffanyanne3 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 15

Poor, poor Bella. I know Edward will get there in time, but how horrible for her. I hope this doesn't end up making Edward want to stay awau from her...that whole "what's best for Bella" thing he does. Lol. Great chapter. I really enjoy your writing.

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 15

HOLYCRAPIHOPETHEYGETTHEREINTIME!

Please PLEASE pleaaasseeeee update soon =D

Reviewer: edward08 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 15

well that was great just update sooner

Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 15

Oooh, this angst...my fluffy loving heart is hurting..lol! But it made for an awesome chapter...gosh, I can't even imagine having to watch something like Edward did. And good for Bella for trying to fight back...hopefully Edward will get to her soon. Hurry back!

Reviewer: Linds14 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 15

Oh boy..I was so relieved when Edward and Emmett were able to get away from James safely...now they just have to make it to Sully's and get Bella out safely :S...They better kill James in the end...he's already proven to be too manipulative to be allowed to live, and if he went to jail he would probably get out again..

God..poor Bella. :(

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