Reviewer: DrReidLvr (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2010 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 8: Misunderstandings
Love this story however guess I'm done reading it. Your new website doesn't work on my Blackberry, the only way I'm able to get online :(
Reviewer: petit4dreams (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 8: Misunderstandings
GREAT please finish....I loved your first one as well
Reviewer: solecito (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 8: Misunderstandings
ok just so you know i read the honeymoon and couln't stop, so when i found out that the story kept going i was happier than bella and edward on isle esme lol. so please continue this story as fast as you can but please dont stop after the birth just keep going and finish what BD should have been like.
Author's Response: I am no longer posting stories to this site. I have formed my own fanfiction site. You're all very welcome to come and join!
http://freewritersandreaders.ning.com
Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 8: Misunderstandings
Hope you update soon, going a little nuts Lol.
Reviewer: nocturnal_rendevous (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 8: Misunderstandings
I like it so far...
Reviewer: dfwmb685 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 8: Misunderstandings
How long until the next chapter? Excellent writing I love your version. I was always sooooo disappointed that Edward's POV was not included in the book (He was the father right ? I'm just saying)
Author's Response: And the rest of the books were about...HELLO!...Bella and Edward!!! LOL She completely deserted the premise of her previous three books with Breaking Dawn. (my opinion, of course). They were NEVER about Jacob. And then we get an entire half of the book in HIS POV?? Yuck. I have a very bad feeling about Breaking Dawn: the Movie. The book was bad enough, just think what the movie is going to be like.
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 8: Misunderstandings
I so like your version of Breaking Dawn. I like this Edward better!
Dixie
Reviewer: maserati (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 8: Misunderstandings
I saw your story in passing and immediately went back to read the previous one about their honeymoon. No disrespect to SM, but your version is what I would have hoped to read in hers. Great writing skills! I love seeing Edward taking a more active role in the pregnancy. I mean, you can only take so much brooding silence, or at least I can. Thanks so much for writing this wonderful story!
Author's Response: I agree with you. One could expect Edward to fall apart at least for a little while. It was in his character to brood. But, my GOD, to sit at her feet for going on two weeks!!! And just do nothing but sit?? I just didn't get that at all. It just seemed so OOC to me. That's why I wanted to write my own version. Glad you like it.
OTB
Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 8: Misunderstandings
Beautiful chapter. I'm glad Edward and Bella really talked about what was bothering her.
Reviewer: Jenny Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 8: Misunderstandings
Great chapter! Love the smut, and I'm glad they had a serious talk!
Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Introduction and Prologue
Are you gonna put the idea of Bella drinking blood in your story? Lol, Sorry for all the questions.
Syndi
Author's Response: Yes, I'm using that idea. I have to if I want her to survive long enough to have the baby. I can't change the fact that Nessie is craving blood inutero, and still have her a hybrid baby.
Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 8: Misunderstandings
great chapter!
Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 8: Misunderstandings
This chapter was very touching, can't wait for more! One question though why haven't they thought about having Bella drink blood?
Syndi
Author's Response: If you go back and read that part of Breaking Dawn, the idea never occurred to them until late in the pregnancy. And JACOB was the one who accidentally gave it to them. Edward overheard his thoughts as he was snidely referring to the baby as a bloodsucker. So...ask Stephenie Meyer that question! LOLOL
Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 8: Misunderstandings
Lovely! I am SO glad that they talked! I think they can be on the same page now, except I think that Bella would choose the baby over herself if any problems come up.
I look forward to seeing how you proceed with this story. You may do things 100% differently from BD!
Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 7: The Calm Before the Storm
THE NURSERY IS BEAUTIFUL & THIS STORY FREAKING ROCKS!! Update A.S.A.P please!!!
Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 7: The Calm Before the Storm
I really like this story! I'm hoping that Carlisle gives up his idea of going to the Volturi though. All it would take is one touch from Aro for them to find out that Bella is pregnant with Edwards' child.
Author's Response: Carlisle doesn't have to go to the Volturi PERSONALLY for him to get information! That would definitely be too dangerous!
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 7: The Calm Before the Storm
The nursery is beautiful! I loved this chapter, I can't wait for more!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 7: The Calm Before the Storm
That nursery is gorgeous!
Good chapter! E will come around to loving the baby soon, I am certain!
I am wondering if you could comment on Bella's SIZE from the baby every now and then. THANKS!
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: I will try to do that, but you can't imagine how frustrating it is to figure this pregnancy progression out. SM gave us very little to go on in terms of how quickly her body changed. The ratio is stunning. I'm leaning towards a week and a half in a NORMAL pregnancy, for every DAY that Bella is pregnant!! It's a major pain in the ass to figure out, let me tell you! :)
Reviewer: Jenny Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 7: The Calm Before the Storm
Oooh, great chapter! I love that Bella felt comfortable enough to break down in front of Esme and Rose. :)
Reviewer: Ehllenalin (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 6: Marriage
Ooh…cliff hangy last sentences are evil! ;) update soon!
Author's Response: I just went through and took out nearly all of the exclamation points in the last chapter. I'm going to do the same with the rest. Sorry. The last thing I want to do is make reading my stories an unpleasant experience. :(
Reviewer: lexy lujan (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 5: Heart to Hearts
why do you put sooo many damn exclamation points everywhere? you dont need to yell, sheesh.
seriously though, its really unnessicary to put soo many all the time. other from that, i love this story. keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Sorry...I'm NOT yelling. I prefer to call it enthusiasm. But you're right. I've been criticized for that many times and will try and work on that flaw of mine. *smiles*
Reviewer: Fabulus (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 6: Marriage
Omg guess what? I'm reading Alice's strory and I'm loving it. I read 24 chapters in 2 days u got me addicted. I'm addicted to your stories lmao...
Author's Response: Haha! Told ya you'd like it!!! That makes me SO happy!!! That story is like my little "red-headed stepchild" story. I have so much trouble trying to lure people to it, just because Bella and Edward aren't in it! But be honest...don't you just LOVE Morgan???! LOL I loved that vampire for months before he even made it into a Microsoft Word document!! Thanks! Please spread the word!
Reviewer: dh_director (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 6: Marriage
Please please please update soon.
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 6: Marriage
Great chapter, interesting side about Alice. Update soon!
Reviewer: mil06 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 6: Marriage
it's great! I can't wait for you to update!
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