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Reviewer: Ambrie (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2013 03:46 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Resilience
Wonderful story, lovely writing - hoping for more soon! :)
Reviewer: Lethaltxhunny (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2013 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Conversations over Dinner
Renee is too nosy.. but like how this isn't story isn't just a fairytale fully through
Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2013 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Resilience
Glad Bella is finally realizing that Rose is simply a jealous sow.
Reviewer: Lethaltxhunny (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2013 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 2- Happiness is Not Universal
Wow! Your version on Rose isn't afraid of throwing a few punches at all. Love it!
Reviewer: ludo (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2013 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Resilience
Go Bella!!!!
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2013 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Resilience
Almost. You know bury Rose in Alaska.. Leave her alone and let her nasty behaviour cost her something that means somehing to her.
Reviewer: kgunter34 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2013 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Resilience
Love it, great chapter.
Reviewer: dls84 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2013 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Resilience
Was wondering if Charlie would find them parking
Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2013 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Resilience
Nice progress... but ... seen the summary, when is the other shoe going to drop?
Reviewer: dls84 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2013 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Retirement Planning 101
Just found this one, Love it, can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Just posted another chapter in queue!
Reviewer: ludo (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2013 02:17 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Retirement Planning 101
Thank you for continuing to write this wonderful story. It is so very hard to find a vamp/human in canon story these days and Im very pleased you are continuing with yours. I re-read from the begiining an Im glad I did. What a well-written story with an excellent plot line! I look forward to reading more when you are next able to post :)
Author's Response: Thanks for your lovely review! I appreciate your patience!
Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2013 01:21 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Food for Thought
I had to re -ead, but I must say I like the story a lot. This particular chapter was so amusing (and gave me details about how the Cullens manage food when they can't avoid it).
But, you update very slowly. Will you update again in a reasonable time when I reach the last chapter? Otherwise I'll forget everything again.
Author's Response: Thanks for coming back to keep reading. I know it has beena very long while but life sort of happens and things get put on the back burner. I am almost done the next chapter and will post before the week is out!
Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2013 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Conversations over Dinner
Why does Bella even CARE about that witch? I wish she'd get over this guilt crap.
And I don't believe for a SECOND that Rose gives a rat's ass about Bella or her humanity. She's jealous that Edward didn't want HER, then fell head over heels for a human.
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2013 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Retirement Planning 101
can't wait for your next chapter.. great story by the way..
Author's Response: Thanks for all of your reviews! Working on the next chapter now!!!
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2013 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Conversations over Dinner
that is right. .Then she doesn't, she looses her family by her own decisions. What if Emmett says to hell with this and he leaves her. I know it will hurt him and so does her action.
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2013 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Food for Thought
I wonder if Renee ever thinks why she keeps losing husbands? Maybe too demanding?
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2013 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Retirement Planning 101
I HATE Rosalie! She is such a narcissistic, selfish bitch!
Author's Response: I agreee!
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2013 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Confession
Alice can explain sex in the way the books wont help. Hello.
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2013 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Interrogation
Renee is such a butthole! Just because she is a loser in love, doesn't mean that Edward and Bella are.
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2013 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Unwanted Visitors
Well it is a good thing here. The Pack will owe the Cullens for saving those boys. Next maria is dead and that is always good.
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2013 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Revelations
here she goes again. another thing to brood about. Give up her life about. Sacrafice is fine but only with some situations.
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2013 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Epiphany
Rose will not just come around. She has got to sit out there and miss her family. Emmett really should come to the wedding and let her be. I have had a situation like this in my own family. Well my husbands. His mother died suddenly. They had been married for over 50 years. So daddy meets this woman the age of his oldest daughter and wants to marry her in 8 months after Mama died. Well the girls (daughters) threw a huge fit. End of story the wedding was at my house. Was I thrilled, no. But my father in law asked me and I had to be there for him. Even if I did not agree. When someone is dead it is too late to forgive.
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2013 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Banishment
Better// Carlisle is weak in most stories. To be the head of the coven or family he must have some sort of leadership and be willing to not always be popular.
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2013 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Difficult Choices
I do and I don't. Only one person in that house protested their marriage. Rose. She can not be the person deciding Edward and Bella's future. She blames Bella for everything. Man she is right along with Hollywierd and kristen.
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2013 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 2- Happiness is Not Universal
hard to like anything right now when we want to Kill Rose.. Get a lighter and burn her.
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