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Reviews For Gravity Moves
Reviewer: sunfire04 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 35: Hybrid Species

Great chapter.

Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 04:22 AM · On: Chapter 34: Alpha

Hannah, So what do you think you are doing stealing my author?!?!?!

Hehe, just kidding hun!  She asked me about your story today, so I told her to read it the first chance she gets.  That it is one of my favorites and she would most likely love it too. 

Ok, back to work for me...oh and just so you know, the next chapter is currently awaiting validation, so don't bug me about updating, I'm just waiting on Shabby!

Manda



Author's Response:

me, bug you? why would you ever think that?

i'm a little offended :) haha

and I only "stole your author" because she did such a good job on Another Day! YOU picked a good one! blah blah :)

and my next chapter is up too, just waiting on validation as well.

Reviewer: bekk (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 02:44 AM · On: Chapter 34: Alpha

very, very good, but you cant leave it hanging there need to write more

Reviewer: Whitlocked (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 11:58 PM · On: Chapter 8: Finally, Something Works Out Right


Reviewer: hadley (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 34: Alpha

I just finished reading all 34 chapters in a few day!  Great work, I have really enjoyed it!  This story has so many possibilitieI would love for  Jake and Nessie to be able to have a baby.  I can't wait to see the direction that takes.  I have given the possibilities much thought and I think it would be interesting if Jake was attacked by the italian vampires beyond the posibility of survival, then the Cullen's would change him to save him.  THEN he and Nessi would get pregnent, and that child would be a shifter/vampire/human with Edward and Bella's special abilities.  That child would be the most powerfull supernatural creature on earth.  Just one of my thoughts, I think I think way too much about this!  anyway I can't wait for the new chapter, I am forwarding this story to my friends!!!!!

Reviewer: kycee (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 34: Alpha

I love this story and I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter.

Reviewer: MrsPattinsonheart2 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 34: Alpha

great chapter! i cant wait until the next one! what do the italian vampires want?? hahaha

Reviewer: Jealous_of_Bella (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 34: Alpha

Yikes. I hope things dont "go south"

Reviewer: jacklynnight (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 34: Alpha

Hannah if this was a book I would not be able to set it down.
 I think I might have to be a regular reader. You know the ones who read when the actual update happens.

I only wait because I get so into it I love to be able to read on. So I like to read in bulk. Ironic that I'm impatient when every on else has sooooooo much grace with me.
I honestly can not wait for more...but for you...well I will.
Hugs
 AJ

Reviewer: jacklynnight (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 33: Waiting is the Hardest Part

I love the tension that exists from Ness being both a child and a women all at the same time. And I also love how Edward has not just played it easy. That is most Edward like.


Your story is so realistic and true to the world of Twilight. I have loved the rollercoaster of emotions you've weaved throughout the story. You are one talented girl.


BTW thanks for the shout out. But due to the Godess I'm not sure I can pay the ransom. But I'm happy to say that I'm going to continue....I might move on to ff.net. I'm tired of fighting with the Godess. : )
I love love love this...you can bet that no matter where the rest of Aftergolw ends up...I'll be here to review

hugs
AJ

Reviewer: jacklynnight (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 32: Promises

I am loving every word of it...honestly Hannah you have kept me entertained for like three hours. I love this story.

 

Reviewer: jacklynnight (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 31: Pools of Lust

Totally engulfed. Must read more.

Reviewer: jacklynnight (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 30: Interrogations

I am really intrested in seeing where this will go. The thought of them both as parents makes me all fuzzy inside. *sigh*
I love how they play off Edward as her brother.

I am really not a huge Jake fan, but I love the way you write him. I think the guy is growing on me.

: )

Reviewer: MackenzieWiersgalla (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 29: Hawaii

sorry if you already covered it in the story and i just forgot...but where are edward and bella when renesmee is dreaming, don't they hear her scream when she wakes up?



Author's Response:

Bella and Edward kind of stay away when Jacob is around. They really dont want to know whats going on.and they're Bella and Edward, they're probably off doing it somewhere.

And since Edward and Jacob are on the same page...until about the next chapter...Edward is comfortable with leaving them alone.

and Renesmee doesnt want anyone to know, so she and Jacob sort of guard their thoguhts when theyre around Edward.

Reviewer: jacklynnight (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 28: Dead Man Walking

OMG I read the last three chapters with out even stopping. At some points I was even holding my breath. There is something about your story that as soon as I start I can't stop. I think I might be addicted.
I can not wait for the happy couple to say the I do's.
This is too good.
You rock Hannah.

AJ : )

Reviewer: jacklynnight (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 25: Ball Busting

My eyes got super wide at the words role playing. Hannah, I didn't know this was that kind of story. : )

I was laughing at the thought of it.

Loved every minute of it, but I can not help feel weary of the Aro thing...hmmm.

I'll have to read on.

<3 AJ

Reviewer: jacklynnight (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 24: Re-Routing

I love reading the wolf conversation. I don't know why but I just love it. It's like listening into a conference call. Maybe it is the "go get'em team" attitude, or the fact that they all top act like siblings. I just love it.
Another great chapter.

: )

Reviewer: jacklynnight (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 23: Dreams

My favorite line is, "As long as you're here when I wake up, I'll be O.K." Such a true statement as long as you have someone there when you wake...dreams are just dreams.
I am so siked to read on. A little frightened but totally siked.
AJ

Reviewer: jacklynnight (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 22: Do Something You Idiot

Oh my oh my oh my! I love it. My heart just about broke for poor Jake when he was trying to explain his past relationship with Bella. Maybe my emotions are all out of whack but I was actually crying during that part.
To me this just seems so realistic. This is the pace first time romances move at and your right on with all the monumental moments.
This was great, I mean really great. Oh and I just had to laugh at Emmett's gift.
On to read more : )
AJ

Reviewer: jacklynnight (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 21: Bella Gioierilla

So I'm pretty sure this is right where I left off (leave it to me to stop right during a pivotal point).
And OMG this was a great chapter. It had such a great range of emotions throughout it. I really am thrilled to get the chance to sit down and catch up with it.
Today is the perfect day to do just that. I've been kinda down-so I can honestly say this and watching the Twilighted DVD with commentary have been the highlight of this week.
I honestly can not thank you enough for your encouraging words. They mean so much. I'm going to try to continue though I can't promise it will be soon.
Anyhow I will just enjoy reading your fanfic for now.
AJ : )

Reviewer: so into it (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 34: Alpha

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! you torture me leaving the story like that!!!!!!! please write soon!!!! i want to know everything thats going to happen!!!!!!

Reviewer: Spysgirl (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 34: Alpha

GRRR ARRGH!  I finally got caught up (after reading 34 chapters in 2 days!) and now Ihave to wait for the next installment. I am really enjoying your story. The suspense is killing me.  :)

Reviewer: nondi_rochelle (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 34: Alpha

Damn you, I hate cliffhangers! Your writing is Amazing! Thank you so so so so so so soooooooooo much for sharing your amazing gift with the rest of us. Your doing a great job, can't wait for next chapter!

Reviewer: JayEddie1008 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 34: Alpha

I hate being left hanging. I hope your beta is working some overtime on the next chapter. Nice writing.

Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 12: Muscles Loves Vampira

Emmett was great!  Right on personification!!

Loving this story...and that I'm getting lots of instant gratification!!!

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