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Reviews For Gravity Moves
Reviewer: apple (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 37: Flight to Fight

ah this story is amazing

im so glad nahuel was there :)

cant wait to see what happens :)

Author's Response:

crazy little hybrids.

pop out of nowhere, dont they. hehe

ill try not to make you have to wait too long.

Reviewer: MissBella (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 12: Muscles Loves Vampira

awwww cuuuteee!!

and the bit about emmett was vamptastic i love it all!!


Reviewer: MissBella (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 8: Finally, Something Works Out Right


Reviewer: MissBella (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 3: Age

oh nooooo!

hope things work out!! <3 this. 

chapter 4 now! yayy!

Reviewer: missycullen2010 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 37: Flight to Fight

that is one twist having nahuel in Italy.. Thats one good twist. I thought it was going to be Jacob at first.

Author's Response:

that would have been too easy :)

but yes, Nahuel in Italy, with some rather interesting news too

ill get a new chapter as soon as i can !

Reviewer: uinen (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 37: Flight to Fight

u like to test our patience, don't you? seriously now, i like it more and more, great job

Author's Response:

why thank you :)

and, you know, ive had so many people complain that it was too short, so i made it longer and more suspenseful to take my revenge. haha

glad youre still diggin it after such a long time.

Reviewer: JayEddie1008 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 37: Flight to Fight

Nice cliffy. I'll be looking out for the next one.

Author's Response:

cause you so know its coming!

Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 37: Flight to Fight

ARE YOU FUCKING KIDDING ME!?!?!  You know, I think I hate you right now Hannah. haha, just kidding.  That was the most EVIL cliffhanger you have ever done, I think the most evil cliffie I've ever read on here.  You are now (in my opinion) queen of the cliffies.  That was an amazing chapter.  I figured leaving was going to kill Ness, so seeing it from her POV was good.  I want the next chapter, and soon!


Author's Response:

i do it just becaus i know it pisses YOU off :) [much love haha]

i rather like that, Queen of the Cliffies. it has a certain ring to it...

next chapter as soon as i can. i would like one too. show you mine if you show me yours.:)

Reviewer: chasityc (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 37: Flight to Fight

well that was easy.. lol i hope it all turns out great... please post more soon thanx for writing


Author's Response:

easy? i dont know what you mean.

explain, please. haha. maybe my hair color is just catching up with me.

ill get more out as soon as i can.

Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 2: Her


Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 1: Changes

Wow!!! Nice start to the story!!!!!

Reviewer: mrsn (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 37: Flight to Fight

Oh my...what is Nessie thinking and why is Nahuel in Italy????  And oh, her parents are going to be P-I-S-S-E-D!  :)  Great update!

Author's Response:

oh, you know Edward is livid! haha

and never fear, your questions will be answered in due time

trust and believe my friend.


Reviewer: mrsjwright (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 25: Ball Busting

Still loving the story. I'm reading it on my break at work.

Reviewer: sahisdabest (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 03:01 AM · On: Chapter 36: Calm Before the Storm


god! she has only seen that Nahuel dude, ONCE in her life! and he didn't save her freaking life! he just came with Alice... I seriously think there is something wrong with her... ;) i have reviewed before and i was wondering if you could make a FanFiction.Net account and put this story up there because it is really hard switching sites because the only story i like on this site is yours!!! anyway update asap!! ;]

Author's Response:

give it some time, you'll see she's seen Nahuel more. and they've kept in touch over the years.

and thank you very much for the flattering compliment. about a page, i started one, but it just got too hard keeping up with both. plus i really love my beta here on Twilighted. try out some more of the stories, theyre are some pretty stellar ones on here. if you need/want some suggestions, shoot me an email and i can hook you up.

next chapter is awaiting validation. so, patience is a virtue, and you will all just have to wait!

Reviewer: Deepred (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 36: Calm Before the Storm

well im finally caught up and now i'll torture you for more updates!    lol

Author's Response:

torture me if you must.

and it usually works. i try my best.

totally glad you're diggin it! thanks!

Reviewer: mrsjwright (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 16: You Go Too Fast

I worked third shift last night so I have to go to bed now. This stinks. This story is awesome and I don't want to stop.

Reviewer: Deepred (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 31: Pools of Lust

AHHHHHH How could you end it like that!!!!

Plus i just was thinking about how when the left Bella and Edward didn't tell THEM to BE HAVE just to "be safe" HMMMmmmm

Reviewer: so into it (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 36: Calm Before the Storm

O MY GOD!!!! O MY GOD!!!! OMY GOD!!! Whats going to happen next???? this is so good!!! I was in the same position as you, I'm thankful most of my finals are over!!!! lol. please keep writing this amazing story!!!!!

Reviewer: alyssalove (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 36: Calm Before the Storm

oh gosh! you have have have to update soon!

Author's Response:

chapter 37 awaiting validation!

Reviewer: alyssalove (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 35: Hybrid Species

so..that was amazing. i can't believe you came up with all of that on your own!! i'm frustrated b/c as with all things twilight, nothing can ever just be okay and also that the girls always have to try and be heroes. but it's also why i love all things twilight!


Reviewer: alyssalove (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 03:31 AM · On: Chapter 29: Hawaii

hahah that image of jake is great!

Reviewer: alyssalove (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 02:35 AM · On: Chapter 26: Why Wait?

ahhhhhhhhhhh!!!! there are tears in my eyes :)

Reviewer: alyssalove (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 12:30 AM · On: Chapter 24: Re-Routing

i've said it before, i'll say it're doing a wonderful job.

Reviewer: alyssalove (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 19: Cryptic Messages

i love your story!!! but you can probably already tell that...

Reviewer: alyssalove (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 17: Happy Birthday

switzerland! haha- love it.

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