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Reviewer: Demize (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2012 06:28 PM · On: Looking in the Mirror
thats so cruel and itis heart breaking when you are abandoned by someone you claimed to love but it does get better and its good to read that even in his darkest moments he found someonew that would truly be there for him... Because as they say karma is a bitch !!
Reviewer: wingedcolors (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2011 09:30 PM · On: View from the Outside
LOVE IT!
Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 11:50 AM · On: View from the Outside
why did you choose there to end?
Author's Response: To be honest, I like that part. Now in real life there is rarely a point where all the loose ends are tied up. This way, the reader can pick the door that they like.
Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 11:21 AM · On: View from the Outside
very very interesting. i have read stories where jacob is the abusive one but this is my first time reading one with edward in that role. very well written.
Reviewer: R1R1H2 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 12:37 PM · On: Shakespearean Influence
This story is absolutely heartbreaking. It almost makes me want to cry. Besides the fact that it is so sad it's brilliantly written. I think it was a great idea to do each chapter from another person's point of view. And the refrences to romeo and juliet were properly used. Too many people think it's just about to dumb teenagers. But there love and there strange obssession with bringing the other one happiness is beautiful. I think you really portrayed the story of romeo and juliet really well.
2 thumbs up!
Reviewer: EdwardsCrow (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 08:09 PM · On: Shakespearean Influence
wow that was dark...i mean i was totally expecting it due to the warnings but....wow.....i was blown away. I will say though, well written, well thought out...I loved it dispite the darkness and charrie death.
Reviewer: gg1982 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 09:50 AM · On: View from the Outside
ok its not the real twilight so the commen about it not being edwards character is umm DUMB cuz thats what this site is 4 2write what u want how u want. anyways great story i wish u just would of picked a door...jakes door 2 be honest...see edward got his happy endin already when i don think he should have but whatever..jakes some luv 2 which he dont get nearly enough of!!!
Reviewer: ashleyr132002 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Shakespearean Influence
I think that I might like this story if it were not about Bella and Edward!!!!! But then I am a sucker for happy endings!!!!!!!!!
Peace, Ashley
Reviewer: samantha-cullen0302 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Shakespearean Influence
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh what about poor edward???????????/
Reviewer: cherforty (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 12:54 AM · On: View from the Outside
Love the 3 door option or rather what it represents. Keep writing.
Reviewer: cherforty (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 12:29 AM · On: Shakespearean Influence
WOW! You did me in.
You did me in. Sad, sad, disturbing, but still great story.
Reviewer: cherforty (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 12:22 AM · On: Shakespearean Influence
Dead! your killing me but still a really good writer!
Reviewer: cherforty (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 12:15 AM · On: Shakespearean Influence
You got my attention.
Reviewer: IrishPeanut07 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 07:02 AM · On: Shakespearean Influence
yes, dark and twisty, but ok.
Reviewer: Olinka (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 12:33 AM · On: Shakespearean Influence
You hate "Romeo and Juliet," don't you? :)
Reviewer: Strider (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 07:42 PM · On: Shakespearean Influence
Oh, so sick and sad. But true to character for Bella, definitely. Poor Edward.
Reviewer: Strider (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 07:38 PM · On: Shakespearean Influence
Oh no! I love your tension between Charlie as cop and Charlie as dad. I can't imagine what's next...but I have to know!
Reviewer: Strider (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Shakespearean Influence
Oh, wow. You did a good job of building suspense, then to leave it like that...wow! I'm off to read the next chapter!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Shakespearean Influence
Yes, dark and disturbing. But, how else was it going to be? Well written.
Reviewer: tri (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 04:50 PM · On: Shakespearean Influence
oh crap !
Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 04:41 PM · On: Shakespearean Influence
wow..what a dark end. it's good to finally see what jacob was thinking.
Reviewer: edwardsbabe (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 07:30 PM · On: Shakespearean Influence
ok that all happend really fast but it was ok
amy
Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 06:29 PM · On: Shakespearean Influence
does bella poison herself only to wake up later after jacob kills himself upon seeing her dead? hence the title of your story?
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 07:30 AM · On: Shakespearean Influence
Soooo awful! Even though I knew you were headed this way, it made my stomach drop! I know that this is only fiction, but it is such a real circumstance that I can't help but be affected by it!
Reviewer: bella_edward05 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 09:54 PM · On: Shakespearean Influence
omg. I knew he was crazy. But wow. I can't belive he killed her and comited suicide. As soon is I read the note my heart jumped. I knew what he meant.
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